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Hi, I'm Hawkie and I'll be your reviewer today. ^^ I think you have an interesting idea here with a lot of potential. However, the way you told it was ...

Hey Sophia. :-) I'll be your reviewer today. When you say to someone, ‘Please kill me now,’ you don’t actually expect them too. Holy flying spaghetti monster! This is a ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! ^^ I'm Hawkie and I'll be reviewing you today. I’ve buying it at quite a steal Should be "I'm," not "I've." Your love, my gain ...

Wow, this is very impressive! I'll second the above review on that one stanza, though. It feels out of the flow of the rest of the poem. Also: Fading from ...

Hi, Lawson! :-D I'm Hawkie and I'll be reviewing you today. I. Nit-picks Left foot. Right foot. Left foot. He kept running. As his leg pushed through the air, his ...

Hi, Insanaca! Welcome to YWS! I'm Hawkie, and I'll be reviewing you today. Coz' everytime I think It's you This part doesn't make a lot of sense to me. Is ...

Hi there! It's Hawkie and I'll be reviewing you today. This is a cool poem; it's really sweet. My one complaint is that it seems a bit run-on; there's no ...

:O At the bottom of the page and no reviews! Hawkie must fix. :-) First of all, I don't understand your theme very well. Is this a love song, a ...

Wow. This is like, really cool. Good job. It's always hard to review lyrics because you can't hear the music that goes with them. There's only one line that bothers ...

Hi Thorn. :-)It's your faithful editor Hawks here! It was around 8:44 now, I would refrain from using "now" in the diary format whenever possible. It's really confusing. Just say ...

Hi, Thorn. :-) You get my first review on the new site! By the way, I luvvv your signature quote. How true. This morning, I awoke to a terrific dream. ...

Hello. ^_^ It's Hawkie. Glad to be the first reviewer. and the chill felt throughout my spine. The last line is way too long in my opinion. hear the chimes ...

Hi. ^^ I'm Hawkie, and it looks like I'll be the first reviewer! It's an honor. ^_^ In agony Of troubled thoughts, She turns to Mom, Who cannot help. The ...

Hi there. I'm Hawkie and I'll be reviewing you today. ^_^ I like how, even though you don't rhyme, your central rhythm holds the poem together. Good job. Purples and ...

Hi Wind. ^^ Hawkie it is, and I will be reviewing you today. Lyrics are typically hard to review since you can't hear the music that goes along with them, ...