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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 4

    I'm running out of variations of hello/hey/hi without falling into the "Greetings!" or "Salutations!" territory, so-- Yo, whaddup, I'm gonna review ya chapter. “That’s alright,” the man said, pu

    Apr 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 3

    Heyo, you know how it goes. Gonna leap right into things, but I will say that this chapter was just as good as the previous two. She gestured into the ...

    Apr 27, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter Two

    Hi! Back again. Gonna dive right in, but I will say real quick that I'm enjoying this story so far! But Aldik wasn’t usually part of the mischief that needed ...

    Apr 26, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter One

    Heya, Vyper! Saw you posting a bunch of chapters for this and thought I'd try to review it from the start since you're not super far along yet. My reviews ...

    Apr 25, 2018
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: The Fey Conspiracy: Part 2

    Heya, Adri. You already know that I've not been reviewing much recently, but I hope that this review lives up to some expectations and helps you out. I'm in a ...

    Apr 24, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: "Danser" Pt. 5

    Heya, part five, nice! So, I don't have a lot of time, but I'm gonna jump right in. here wouldn't be strange blond boys that appear for reasons unknown, or ...

    Apr 15, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Fairystruck [1]

    Hey, Raye! Looks like I'm finally reviewing something of yours for once. *finger guns* And ohhh, heck. Detectives? Plus magic? Bro, that's my most recent jam! I finished a book ...

    Apr 12, 2018
  • Short Story » Culture, General Re: on the wire [part two]

    Heyyy, Pomp! Finally got around to this second part. My memory of the first part is a bit spotty and mixed up with some other things I've reviewed since then, ...

    Apr 10, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: "Danser" Pt. 4

    Hiya! Gonna dive right into grammar things and yadda yah-- then content. You know the drill by now, yeah? I will live. I have to live. Your thoughts are a ...

    Apr 7, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Ghost Man (4/4)

    Hey, Elinor! So the final part of this story, eh? This part was done pretty well, and I like how the story picked up from last time, then lead us ...

    Apr 7, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Ghost Man (3/4)

    Hey, Elinor! I'm back again and gonna roll right into the usual. She immediately got my broom and started sweeping while Rick stood awkwardly off the side. You already named ...

    Apr 6, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: "Danser" Pt. 3

    Hey, manilla! Finally getting around to this. Excited to see how it plays out from the ending of the last chapter! So, grammar stuff first, as usual. The iron tang ...

    Apr 6, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Dark Crown - Chapter 1.1

    Hey there, scarletvee. Belated welcome to yewis! My reviews are typically grammar-heavy, so I'll focus on that and then try to touch on actual content. Let's get going, then-- When ...

    Apr 4, 2018
  • Short Story » Culture, General Re: on the wire [part one]

    Hey, Pomp! Here to try and review your work. I'm not sure how well I'll be able to touch on the points that your author note asks for, but I ...

    Apr 2, 2018
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Ghost Man (2/4)

    Hey there, Elinor! Same deal as last time - grammar stuff, then I'll try to mention my thoughts on the content itself. Here we go! "I'm fine," I replied. "Liz, ...

    Apr 1, 2018


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