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Re: The Kidnapping
This story is a whirlwind. A little confusing as everything is happening so fast, the readers barely have time to catch their breath, but still very engaging. The ending is ...
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Re: Lost Heart
So first off this is not really a story its more of a collection of thoughts, it changes from present, to that day, to the schools days. It is also ...
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Re: Midnight
First off let me say that this imagery was clean cut and crisp, but still so sensory and beautiful. The story line is very interesting, and despite being a short ...
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Re: Years without him
This is really really intriguing! I honestly love the idea but right now it seems we only have the skeleton...I believe you can do so much more with this story. ...
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: Another Day In Someone's Life- Part 1
This story is short sweet and full of whimsy. I love the idea of "I halted and dropped the colored pencil I was using to illustrate the said waves. I ...
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Re: L'ange de la Mort
This piece was so full of beautiful imagery in a very un-beautiful situation. The ending really sunk its teeth into the reader, I love this piece. The french revolution is ...
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Re: A Paper bag and a Sign...
This is a interesting piece, the way a person views themselves and how they think others might view them is an interesting topic. An idea I had while reading this ...
Jun 1, 2015
