Hannah

hey! Because when other people hug me It’s not quite the same The warmth is still there But it’s just heat With them, There are no giggles, Smiles, Irritation, Little ...

Oh girl, a college application essay? then you KNOW i am all over this. these are important; we have to get them right. we have to work for hours and ...

oh i am so glad to be here to review this for you.. first of all, i think it sounds just fine in English, the title, and it would be ...

hi, lovely. she is you, and you are matching her drink for drink, one gunshot at a time. this is a line that makes me think that even if everything ...

Hey, Elinor! it was pitch black and the snow fell in thick torrents. girl, torrents is used for water / other liquids, and mostly for rain. torrential rain, you know. ...

Now, most of the intention behind this piece is good. I'd like to say there's a favorite sound for everyone in the world, and though sound is not as connected ...

Now, I know this was probably the MOST HILARIOUS thing in real life, and I'd probably die laughing, too, but in retelling it's not actually that funny because we're missing ...

here's the downfall of this all: "my emotions grow intense" absolutely completely vaguely told, with nothing to feel or grab onto at all, my friend. this poem is a lot ...

Okay, there's not going to be much of an audience for an essay in French on a mostly English-speaking writers forum, but kudos to you for writing it and posting ...

Eek! I'm here for another review. First of all, I am SUPER confused about the change of character I've seen in Zane between these two sections. Like, in the first ...

waaat, everything was so painfully constructed, that i wondered if the repetition of mosquitoes was intentional. it had to be. it has to be, doesn't it? but it doesn't sound ...

I was test subject 21, female, supposedly they told me I had just turned seventeen, another number. spell out twenty-one. how can they "supposedly" tell her something? either they did ...

i would take out the velvet. or if not take it out, i would move it somewhere else. i think it interrupts the beat, you know, muffles it, and i'd ...

lovely. very tight, very precise, very thought out. you know what you wanted to do and you did it, but the one thing that really bothers me is the end. ...

Hey there! The main point I want to focus on in this critique is that the old, tried and true essay method of saying, I did this, look: "quote quote ...