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Hannah

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  • Poetry » Culture, Satire Re: Ouroboros

    Hi there, Chaser! First of all, you've got a gorgeously selected title for this poem -- right away, just by knowing the subject matter and the meaning of the title, ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Script » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Life Is Full Of Strange Magic (Graphic)

    Hey there, Mrs Creepy Pasta! I'm stoppin' by to take a look at this creepy script of yours. Let's see! So first of all, the question I have is: how ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: Shame

    Hi, Dreamy! Stoppin' by to see what this Shame is all about. Oh my goodness, that first paragraph is a delightful roller coaster ride. I found myself laughing aloud, when ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Am a Traveler

    Hey there, Knight Writer! I was immediately drawn in by the description of this poem, because I kind of identify as someone who has moved schools a lot as well. ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Lyrics » Humor, General Re: Tik Tok Review Clock

    Hi, Nite!! Wow, we talked about this, when? Last review day? Or the review day before? When was I here last and when did we talk about it? Haha. Anyway, ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: What Happens

    Dear Lael, I was immediately drawn in by the description of this poem, because although it's not a situation I have to deal with personally, I have many, many friends ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Cleaning up the house.

    Heya, Pernicus. First of all, I really like that the simple, descriptive, but intriguing title accurately describes the poem that awaits inside. And after reading through the poem twice, getting ...

    Apr 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: whitman-napo for 4/21/17

    Gurl, dis ain't even a Green Room review but I'm givin' it to you because you are bunches of love. And I am really digging the absurdist moments in this ...

    Apr 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: I Want to Believe You

    Hi there, 2001cvs! I am leaving this review because of the amazing solidity of the last stanza. The rhyme, the rhythm, the message -- it's all so sturdy and well-communicated ...

    Apr 26, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Thoughts of a pained soul

    Hey, Girl, That last line is too real. I know that feel, and wish it wasn't true. Although time seems to make it better, mostly! Now, remember how I stopped ...

    Apr 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 10

    B-b-b-b-back~ Not only that, but this was obviously Ivy’s safe space, and he had just barged right in, yelling, without regard for the peacefulness of the place at night. UH ...

    Apr 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 9

    What!? That first sentence is already so awesome. Do you know why I think so? Because it shows that Nikki does not only exist in her time with Grey and ...

    Apr 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 8

    I like the split-scene style, too, because it kind of asks me to compare the characters' actions and emotions. You seem inclined to take the time to slow down and ...

    Apr 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 7

    Fort, here I am! Nikki snorted then mocked playfully, “Oh you’ve asked plenty. He just answers yours without a fuss, don’t you loverboy?” Whaaaaaat, noooo. This feels way too soon ...

    Apr 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 6

    Fortis! Told you I'd get here eventually. So right away, I feel like I'm missing a relationship development with Ghost. Like, he's taken in, and then we see him feeling ...

    Apr 25, 2017


Nouns can verb very well actually, they verb better than some verbs do.
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