Hannah

So, I know you asked me to review your rapist's note poem, Toe, but I think I'd have largely the same things to say about that as I would this ...

Repetition is a useful tool. Especially in groups of three, it seems often like the perfect number of repeats to help us remember a sequence or a word. There is ...

My first question to you is what you think separates poetry from prose. What do you think makes a piece of writing able to be categorized as a poem instead ...

This is what I have: A gorgeous, visual, vivid beginning, and a mind-bending last two lines with not a lot in between. I understand that a lot about the sea ...

So! This is probably a poem really close to your heart. We have all lived through summers and maybe the idea of missing them, that they're caught behind the wall ...

So, when I was studying fiction writing at college, I remember my teachers often saying that the first page or so of a work can often be readily cut, because ...

I'll second that your synopsis is immediately intriguing, so AWESOME job on that. haha. I'm now going to give you my thoughts as I read through the first time. You ...

These are first-read-through impressions: you can see that we are all no more than insects, foraging through the day Two things here. Sudden direct address is awkward. You jerk the ...

I think the awesomeness of the sentiment of the first two lines was lost in a very straight-forward, not so crafted rest of the poem. Yes, we know roses are ...

I don't understand what this is meant to be. I guess in a serious of other scenes with these characters it would make sense, but this doesn't even seem to ...

Woah! This! What? This is nice. This is so weird, and it needs a lot of cleaning up, but for some reason I like it how it is. I like ...

This is pretty well carried off, and I love potatoes more than anything. I have been lately wondering if it's true that we can live off just potatoes and butter, ...

This is an interesting premise. There's a lot of power in dream and dream imagery. Many of us dream, and many of us try to look for meaning in our ...

I was totally with you on how you wanted to portray this girl as kind of feeling like she was in a bland life while other narratives had their slopes ...

Ahh! I don't know! I feel like I've seen this before, even if indie hasn't. It always gets played the same way: the kid's too innocent to even know what's ...