Hannah

Here we go~~~ "Would you have sex with me, Ryan? It would be perfect, for the both of us." AHHHHHHH. Like I said earlier, it is really odd to have ...

Hey again! "Yeah, alright..." Tracey found Jason last night while walking from the school. This was really confusing because you suddenly moved from one place and time to another without ...

In spite of what the shiny Tailow had said, I took all the money. If they were serious about coming after me, I would just beat them again. Okay, Dark. ...

ACK! Okay, first of all, I was completely blindsided by the sexual tones in this story. We go from an epic world-building to a really odd scene between a mother ...

Okay, Dark~ Here again. Looks like we can do a paragraph for editing practice! All over where large condominiums and smaller houses. People moving in and out of them. I ...

Hey again, Dark. So, I'm here for part two and it's much shorter than the first. They go really well together. It seems like there's no break in time, so ...

Hey, Dark. I saw that some parts of this story were in the Green Room, so I figured I'd start from the beginning. I have to say that I, for ...

Hey, Em! Stopped by to drop a comment on a featured poem. I can see why you received a lot of likes. It's nice, it's clean, it's simple and accessible. ...

Hey there~ I really loved the way you built out this culture and hierarchy of drum line very clearly, even for people that have never been involved. When you said ...

So, here are some quick thoughts up front. I understand that to you, you researched carefully the meanings of the tarot cards to match the meanings of the stanzas with ...

When you think about it, "I love you" as a phrase is not very meaningful. You and I both know there are so many different kinds of love: family love, ...

I think that you could have done more with this as a poem. Right now it's basically the same letter of gratitude that anybody could write to him. Don't you ...

I think the idea is interesting. I like quiet small ideas, that life could be just the sound of leaves under your feet, but I think it would be beneficial ...

It's really hard to write about times of intense emotion that happen in such short periods of time, but it can definitely be done. The thing is that you have ...

Okay, firstly, you need to take responsibility for your writing and make sure it is as polished as it can possibly be before posting it here. I mean, just the ...