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Hello there, I like the optimistic, happy voice that is so present throughout this short piece. There is not a hint of negativity, even when the speaker considers whether she ...

Here I am, sir! Back again! Haha, THERE we go, THERE is the girl. There's always a girl, isn't there? And, being the kind of person I am (which is ...

Hey there, JumpyDot, You had me hooked with your brilliant description of his voice popping like a snot bubble. I loved that intense punch of voice, and that got me ...

Hey there, Kayla! I feel like I saw this in a jam somewhere. Lemme go through your author's notes and share what I think! 1. What do you think of ...

Fortis! I read this yesterday, I think, and did not have time to drop a review. But I'm here now! So what I feel like I get from this chapter ...

Knight Saru! Hey there! I am so happy to pop on in here and see a pretty poem like this. You made it in ten minutes, but I love that ...

Hey there, hippyhoodrat! I was immediately drawn to this poem because I've tried to write the same one! I love seeing how other people express artistic expression in other forms ...

Hey there, Becca, I was caught by your first line, because I wanted to know what you do on those Sunday mornings, and I wasn't disappointed. The specifics you chose ...

Hey, there, Knight Biscuits! It's been a long, long while, and I'm not sure I've even read any of your work before. Which is a shame, because this is pretty ...

Hey there, erinnasir -- Did something happen with your formatting? You can go in and edit your post to fix it up, and I'll come back to see how it ...

Hey, there, Rebin, What I see as the strengths in this poem are the repetition of structure leading the reader on a clear journey (we get views of the same ...

Hey there, Knight Saru~ I love the way you throw the reader straight into the action, but upon closer inspection I wonder about this line: now’s not the time to ...

Hey there, regismare, I have to say, I think this is the first time I've seen a poem that glorifies the profession of hacker. It's always refreshing to see a ...

Hey there, Thisislegacy. Man, what a ride. I first want to pull out some of the parts of this piece where I thought the flow and the rhyme were just ...

Hey there, Queen of Science! My first suggestion would be that if you have stories of this size that you break them up into two parts when you post them. ...