Hannah

Back again. It feels nice to be back in the swing of things~ So, first off I noticed two things in this area: "We should split up, Ryan." Jill suggested. ...

Hey, dark! It's been a long while since I've been around this story, so I have forgotten a lot of what was going on and had to go back and ...

I love this. I love that even though I don't have it exactly straightened out because you purposefully wrote it all vague and hard to get a firm grasp of, ...

Alrighty, here I am as promised~ Haha. Okay, so: She poked her bottom lip out, subtly and unconsciously then she nodded and continued to look ahead. “I’m sorry to hear ...

This is a breezy, beautiful, and cleanly written opening to what I hope will be a gorgeous, well-written novel full of characters and imperfect personalities and realistic interactions. Your dialogue ...

So I suppose this will be the last we see of each other until you get to revising your later chapters! It seems sad, and for that reason I read ...

Hey, Hecate! Is this from your job search that you were talking about? Man, I know this feeling. Here are some things I liked: My favorite was the image of ...

Hey there, timmyjake! I've finally made it to the piece you asked me to review~ On this, our fine review day~ First, I have to say wow. Your writing is ...

I like that it's clear that the relationship is toxic and not good for this person, and they admit that, and they even explain how it's toxic: the empty promises, ...

Hmm. Interesting. I don't know if I'm putting an incorrect meaning to these words because of my own personal experiences lately, but the way I'm interpreting this is about an ...

Very simple, very quick, very plain. What I like to do with poems that have refrains like this is take out the refrain and look at the meat in between. ...

Hmmm. I want to know what problem this is referring to. I like that the poem makes me want that information. And the poem makes me want that information because ...

MY FRIEND HELLO~ I am here to rescue your sonnet from the depths of the green room and enjoy it while I'm here~ But the big question on my mind ...

Hey, Knight Nite! I always feel like I'm missing the biggest part of the piece when I review lyrics 'cause I can't hear the music. Even if the words seem ...

Oh man, that last stanza makes it all worth it, doesn't it? fortis, do you think you could live with a poem if it looked like this? We watch the ...