Hannah

Hello! Well, let's get right down to it: I didn't like it. I felt that it read like an okay description in a prose piece rather than a poem. It ...

Hello, Kyllorac. Motley was a great word to begin with, but it went south after there. I would ask you to look at the poem and attempt to summarize what ...

The problem with these lyrics is that they don't really say anything. If you read it, it's just really vague and it's like 'oh, the same old thing over and ...

Hey, LPR! This is a great idea, first of all, to write about someone who was affected without writing about the people that died or how they felt, someone who ...

Hello! I think this a really nice start to a piece because you could bring so much fear and emotion into it. To really make it rise to its full ...

Hello, Writer! ^_^ It's nice to see a post in scripts, and just from the introduction and list of characters, I can tell this might be a refreshing dip into ...

So, this is not done. I completely understand that under the time constraint, you didn't have much time to put together a satisfactory ending, but if I don't see a ...

Evi, having read a large bit of this before, I just want to say for you to take any comments about pacing with a grain of salt since this is ...

Hey, Aristotle! Now, most of these are a matter of taste. Couplets are often seen as thing that are really insignificant and so they're forgotten in a matter of minutes. ...

Hi, baby. Here are some of my thoughts on the matter. Now I'm not saying that poetry is ALL ABOUT the conservation of words, but I think that you can ...

Hey, Kaedee. I have one big piece of advice for you and I hope that you take some time to consider it. This problem really hit me when I read ...

Not to be rude, but I will not have read any of the previous reviews. xD If I repeat anything that's been said so far, my apologies. I really like ...

This was a very interesting piece and I was drawn in by the story, but there are a few general things I am wondering about. First of all, what is ...

I think the biggest problem with this piece is that it's very shallow. You name off all these events that the characters shared, but you don't describe why these events ...

Hey, Hero! I must say I was confused by the title at first, but then I got it and then I thought it was a little too obvious! Try finding ...