HaleyPenguin

thank you so much :)

Oh, I see. But you're welcome. Keep this up! :)

No problem. :D

Thank you so much. :)

Thanks for the advice. (I'm actually having a little problem with paragraphing. I don't know if it's my keyboard, or if I have to do something different on here to ...

thank you

Thank you so much

This is really good. It speaks from the heart and mind. It really shows the controversy between right and wrong. I was pulled in from the very beginning. Keep on ...

This is really good. It really gets the reader pulled in and craving more. And I love the unique names you gave the characters. I don't really have any recommendations ...

This is very well done. You wrote this very well. And I absolutely love the title. Talk about catching the readers attention. :) Keep it up!

This is very good. It kept me interested till the very end. But like Mardehoward said, I'd be careful with the quotes. But overall, this story is very entertaining, and ...

Thank you so much for the advice and compliments. :)

Thank you very much. :)

Thank you so much. This really means a lot. And the grammar issues mainly come from my keyboard. If I start typing too fast, it won't pick up all the ...