HaleyPenguin

I love the chorus most of all in the song. It seems to tell it's own story within the song. I really like the way you worded this. I can ...

Yes, I love this. (I love creepypasta.) This was really amazing. I loved every bit of it from beginning to end. The first few words, "When my mother went insane..." ...

Wow. This is beautiful. I really do like the mysterious feeling I was left with. I really do wish that this was longer, or had a second part. But I ...

I like this a lot. It seems to describe what most of today's high school and collage students seem to feel with all the pressure they're under. I really like ...

This... is... Amazing. There's so much detail... It pulled me in and made me the main character. It was unbelievable. I felt the fear, the suspense, and the anxiety. I'm ...

The description in this is phenomenal :) I'm really looking forward to seeing what will happen next. I could see everything so clearly, like I was watching a movie. I ...

First things first. Anything with an apocalyptic storyline is already a 10. You broke that scale and made it an 11. This story is very well written. I was very ...

This is really amazing. The story makes me feel like I'm there. I love the storyline. (Stories I read about serial Killers are usually really boring and I can always ...

I really do love how you used the short sentences. It makes it rather descriptive and makes the noises come to mind that the character is hearing. Just a few ...