Hadj

Why is this not glued to the literary spotlight...

The entire poem was intentionally lowercase and without punctuation besides the period at the end.

When the child responds "yes", it is displaying the supposed ignorance held by humanity, specifically a child, who seems to think that there is importance to their existence.

The poem is written from an absurdist perspective, that is that everything is in utter chaos and there there is no purpose to our existence. The stars aren't meant to ...

The poem is written from an absurdist perspective, that is that everything is in utter chaos and there there is no purpose to our existence. The stars don't think they ...

oh this

I disagree with some of your grammar nitpicks: "why did sun rise if only to set": I want to use "was" to make it repetitive and infinite, not just why ...

I thought The Chrysanthemum was by Steinbeck.. anyways, thanks for the review!

New lines of poetry do not require a capital letter, and end of lines to not require "a full stop", punctuation of poetry is pretty lenient, depending on the mood ...

I'm not really sure what you mean. The best way to get better is by taking in constructive criticism. By taking notice of others advice, and doing your best to ...

You could say the do rhyme, but it's a very weak rhyme, so it doesn't really stand out when reading it.

Maybe it wasn't perfect, but it was relatable to me anyways, so i really enjoyed it. Only I think I'm not going to take your advice at the end there..

more clever than i am anyways

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