Hadj

Hi, I haven't reviewed in a while First off, its a really great poem! I especially liked the first stanza, particularly: "My thoughts were the death of peace" I really ...

Hi there, Hadj here to review Just a few things: 1) "It's power is grand and, oh, what a moving word" The comma between and and oh is unnecessary 2) ...

Hi there, nice poem! A few little things: 1) It might flow better with stanza separation and punctuation 2) "Unless someone tries to interfere Making it narrower and weaker But ...

Nice poem :) Short and to the point. I really like the repetition in the 2nd stanza, but maybe it could've had one or two more lines leading up to ...

Nice work! I love how mysterious these "shifties" are :) A few things i would change: -Tell us about her age. When I read this i thought Ashely was about ...

Woah. For such a short poem, that is very good. However, I read it about twenty times before I even started to understand what it meant literally, never mind the ...

Wow! Nice poem! I really like the rhyme scheme, but even more I love the last stanza. My only complaint while reading it was the line "75 mph" Having a ...

Nice poem, definitely relatable, and it made me laugh :) One small thing, is that you might want to put a period at the end of each sentance, not just ...

This is a beautiful poem! It was full of emotion and very captivating I really liked your allusion to neuton's law of inertia! Normally, I like a poem to rhyme, ...

Great start! I really like reading medieval fantasy! The tone of the king seemed very realistic, I can almost imagine him as a realy person! My only real complaint was ...

Nice poem! :) I really like the repetition at the beginning! Personally, I would leave out some of the more specific words, like media, newspaper and culture to leave it ...

I really like this poem! Very creepy, and a well thought rhyme scheme. It reminded me of reading Lord of the Flies. :) Just a few errors: "darkness crawls, into ...

Woah, nice poem. It seems very open to interpretation. I like the sudden change in attitude at the end. At first you seem more sympathetic, but the last line seems ...

Hi, welcome to YWS (I'm new here too :D) This was a really nice poem, and very much in the spirit for valentines day. I really like the tone, of ...

This is my first review, so it might not be perfect, but here it is: I really like this poem. I can relate being a sibling myself. I was a ...