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Thanks.I'll try to fix that problem. You're right. It sounded quite strange when I read it again. Weird, I thought it was good when I wrote it. Many thanks. I'm ...

:) It's one of the best. :) Keep writing.

:) Perfect! :)

Thanks I know it wasn't pretty good.This might even be my worst poem.It's just that I'm in a hurry and I've been preventing myself from writing to do other things,so ...

Many thanks. I'm glad someone finally read it. I'll fix this chapter and try to put the rest as soon as I have more time. I'm also glad you liked ...

Hi! I love your poem,it is absolutely amazing! :) Keep on writing.

Thank you guys! That was very encouraging, although I think it was wrong to write it, but anger boiled in my head. I really must control it. Thanks again. :)

I'm not quite sure if I used (compromise) right,so please comment.

Amazing!I think it's perfect.Keep up the good work, I mean it!

Hi! I'd like to say..awesome! :) Looks like you're talented. Keep up the good work.

wow!This poem is awesome. Love it, keep up the good work. :)

Amazing poem, I felt like I was there too. Good job with everything, I think it's great. :)

Hi guys, Many thanks for the comments and advises.I'm not quite sure how to make the poem look,but I tried. Please comment.

Very nice!I sometimes feel like that. :)

Love it!very nice poem.Keep up the good work.:)