Gwenevire

Thank you all I will make the corrections right away! :D

Thanks! :D I did kinda notice that as well. I will do my best to avoid Bellaness. I guess I could make her less of a klutz. But what would ...

Thank you! I will have the next Chapter hopefully posted by tomorrow. We will see how it goes with Griffin and Sam. Who knows he may just be teasing her... ...

Thank you for the review! =] I will make my corrections right away! You like it? Or are you just saying that? :lol: I hope you do. I really appreciate ...

Thanks. This is my original idea. Now I have completely changed it all. If you would like to cheque out the new visions here is where you can find 'em

Thanks Camille. Your so helpfull! Really! And I am the complete opposite. I will make my corrections right away! Thanks!

Thanks Kepe. I think I might put the boom in italics as if she is thinking it. Thanks for all your help. I will have chapter 3 up soon! I ...

Thank you Charlie last night I started to write chapter 2 with what you suggested. Surroundings and the voices. Now that I am clear on it all I will start ...

This is an emotion poem I can tell. When you just want to let everything out. Not the best type of poetry. I agree with Cade and Rjjr_vectra. You talkin' ...

Yes I agree with you about the first bit. Overused and not very original. But... I just had to make her fall. Yes I need the voices. But if I ...

Thanks! I have tried my hardest to correct all my spelling errors and I will smooth out the choppiness over time!

Your right. I will get around to it... Someday. When I feel it! Ya knows? Thank you! :)

Take a chill pill. How am I supposed to know. From what it looks like it was about how sad you where. And from what I have heard from you ...

I know... Thanks =]

Thanks =] We weren't to young. But young enough to have cute writing!