Gummy

Yours and ChocolateCello's reviews remind me of both sides of a coin. I appreciate your review. Also, I'll definitely try to follow your advice and add more spontaneity and emotion ...

I wish I had read your review before working on my latest piece. I learned a lot through it. Thank you for your feedback! :)

Upon further inspection, I have discovered that in America, this issue has escalated to the point where GPS units have to be strapped onto their delivery vehicles to mitigate the ...

Haha thanks! :)

Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it. :)

I don't know about you, but that issue with the 3-line rhythm in the 4-line stanza has haunted me since, like... forever. Thanks for the feedback! :)

Funny story, I actually did split this poem into stanzas when I first built it on WordPad. I suppose it lost the line breaks sometime during the posting phase... Anyway, ...

Thanks for the review! ^^

Thanks for the review, it means a lot! Yeah, I often make the mistake of sacrificing grammar to keep the message clear. I'll make sure to try and fix it ...

Thanks for the review! It means a lot. c:

First of all, thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate it! :) I'll answer with a short reply befitting of a short review: The only doubt you expressed about this piece ...

Gummy here to review! I love the whole raincloud motif you have going around here. Usually rain is used to express sadness, but in your case, it expresses hope! Anyway, ...

Derp. I misclicked. Anyway, I thank you for the review, and I'll certainly take your points into consideration next time I write an acrostic poem! :D

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*shivers* I can visualize it now... :S Thanks for clearing that up! :D