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GryphonFledgling

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Curseworker Juan

    Hey, no problem. I totally know what you mean about that kind of elation and the giggling that ensues. It's a wonderful feeling, no? One that I have only discovered ...

    Sep 15, 2008
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: A Siren's Fingerpaint

    Hello, stopping by for part II. I feel bad, not realizing that this was a sequel to something else. I thought perhaps there could be a relationship, since the titles ...

    Jul 28, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Keeping Time

    Wow, this was amazing. A very emotion-filled piece. Yeah, I have nothing to critique. The link to the picture was kinda neat, a nice little surprise in the work. Very ...

    Jul 22, 2008
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Mutts - Thunder

    In answer to the repeating characters: I've gone through and outlined all 100 fics, and the only characters that repeat are Howland and his assistant from number 4. But that ...

    May 28, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Saving Michael

    Italics! Yay! The speech works wonderfully. You have a great piece of work here, even if you had left it. Fabulous, fabulous. Very nice. He sounds more like a scared ...

    May 24, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Saving Michael

    I agree with you that a child can be incredibly intelligent and mature. Trust me, my brother is 10, but he talks like some of my older friends upwards of ...

    May 23, 2008
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The story of a very interesting character: me!

    Yes, I liked the explanation a bit more. It answered my questions. Thank you! :D I can't say as I agree with your reasoning about the Church (Jesus' resurrection was ...

    May 22, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Deleted

    Lone’s house was now off - limits since her parents got busted for candy grass parties. What caused this sudden banning? What happened between the living of Lone's life and ...

    Apr 29, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Creep

    Oooh, very nice. *hooked* I liked this a great deal. You had plenty of description, but you still were able to blend it in so well and keep the story ...

    Apr 3, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Therapists, Unhinged Doors and Grandpa's Fedora

    Awww, thanks for the nice words, everyone! The main character is actually a guy, despite his apparently sounding like a girl, from all the confusion I am feeling emanating from ...

    Apr 2, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Darkness Within, part 2 of chapter one

    Okay, I'm back. Jess and Jason seem to get really close really fast. I mean, I'm a little shy, but I still wouldn't throw my arms around a guy that ...

    Apr 1, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: English Skies

    Yes, the edit is much more to the point with the plane crash. It has a more emotional impact this way. *thumbs up* But still, did you have to kill ...

    Mar 31, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Book - I guess...

    Interesting idea. I'd love to read the rest of it! ~GryphonFledgling

    Mar 30, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Randi

    I'm so sorry for you. And for Randi. Wonderful job on the poem. A beautiful tribute. May Randi rest in peace, and you rest easy. ~GryphonFledgling

    Mar 27, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Saint Is Not A Poet

    Hehe. Sounds like my attempts at poetry. Very nice, Saint. Very nice. Yeah... I have really nothing else to say, but I wanted to let you know you have a ...

    Mar 27, 2008


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