Young Writers Society

Hmmm. Interesting. I'm a Christian myself, and I went to a Christian school for 4 years (just got out last Wednesday ), and there were times when I wanted to smack those people for being so hung up on everything the Bible says. But anyways, the story was pretty good. Not much I would edit. 0(o.o)0

This thought has occurred to others as well, Demeter. It's a mystery that will never be solved.

This was very fun to read. I like your style. And, you're exactly one month older than me! Isn't it great? I don't really find anything to critique (and besides, it's not the same thing than with stories and poems), except for one thing. You spelt "necessary" "neccesary". I couldn't find anything else.

So, nice job overall, oneyedunicornhunter! Gosh, I hate writing that. And I started to wonder something. Is the unicorn hunter one-eyed himself or does he hunt one-eyed unicorns? :O If you could clear that one up, I'd be grateful.

Best wishes
Demeter xx

Yes, I liked the explanation a bit more. It answered my questions. Thank you!

I can't say as I agree with your reasoning about the Church (Jesus' resurrection was not a "zombification" experience... just to clear that up ) and I hope that someday you will change your mind about it, but I'll respect your position. Free will and all that, yes?

And yes, I enjoyed your little rant on vegetarianism.

Overall, I really like your additions. They give more insight on how you actually think and not just facts about you! Very nice.

*thumbs up*

~GryphonFledgling

On your request, GryphonFledgling, I have explained my religious beliefs in more detail.

I also decided to go more into my vegetarianism. I think you'll find my logic very convincing...

Interesting little autobio of yourself. I liked the wit that you brought into it. Very nice. I was most certainly not bored. *two thumbs up*

Why exactly do you disagree with Catholicism? You said you accepted (most, you say?) it in school, so why did you change? That was a bit shady in the piece. I'm a Catholic personally, so I'm just interested in what drove you away.

(still do, but their covered by my hair, which my parents complain twice a day about the state of)

Not with a girl, though...with literature!