GryphonFledgling

See here? The first paragraph here, with its introspection and angst, echoes the first chapter and is again exploring Effie's brain. I like it. It's consistent, it's full of character. ...

Gah, these people can not catch a break, can they? He asked me where Uclepidies was Black Swan? She said his heart stopped and that’s why he’s so sick. She ...

Hey-oh! Stopping by to re-review, as requested! Okay, the beginning here is like a billion times better than the first time. You get right into the action, introducing us to ...

This should be the how-to manual for NaNoWriMo, right down to the unnecessarily long names being repeated in their entirety every single time. You are amazing.

Gryph: You didn't even bother trying to make this into a "real" review, I notice. Ha, just for that, I will point out a nitpick that I forgot to mention ...

Ooh, gracias. *headdesk* Stupid typos. *fixed* because she was hyper-competant and knew how to make a killer PowerPoint presentation Yeah, it is a woman. Thank so much for the review!

Oh and I think chapter 1 may be a bit too long but seriously none of this will have worked in chapter 2 Why not exactly? Could you possible split ...

Hmmm... I've seen this around, but haven't read it yet. You make me want to do so.

Hey hi. Watch the all-caps in your title, m'kay?

*changed to 18+ for strong language* :D

Would you like having a firm picture of what the freak looks like for the beginning, and, if so, what sorts of descriptions of the body are you looking for? ...

*whew* That's a bit easier on the eyes there and much easier to review. Thankies! Okay, review time. This story reminded me a bit of The New York Trilogy by ...

Okay, I am officially in love with Thirry's POV now. Really, it's smart-ass, but it's smart-ass done cleverly and actually funny. Very nice. I actually did not find the POV ...

You made a new one *coughfinallycough*! Hehe, 't has been a while, no? School's just been crazy, that's all. I've been writing them, just not getting the time to put ...

Yeah, I sort of realized after posting that this comes across as more of a fantasy piece than sci-fi, but the series of stories it part of is definitely sci-fi. ...