GryphonFledgling

These were a kickbutt ensemble of 1000 words! I liked how much character you managed to squeeze into each small part, and the descriptions were awesome. I agree with nightshine ...

Strange... But in a good way... I liked it, especially the odd twist at the end, but it felt like it could have had more. Were there any other people ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! I told once (three years ago?) to my friend (who's a couple of years older than me) that she was a very sarcastic and cynical person. ...

Paige looked up with a slight sigh, meeting the gaze of the male stood before her, Frank. I would have that comma before Frank become a period and let his ...

She clung to the metal bar as she travelled upward . T he elevator overlook ed the busy front street, where people in pinstriped suits that cost a month’s wages ...

Hey, I thought I had already read this, and there I was, the first reviewer. *dances* Reading it again lent me a little more insight: It was quiet today , ...

Well, I am here late and so most of the nitpicking has been pointed out already and all the of the debates had ended. Phooey... Anyway, I must agree that ...

Your descriptions here were really nice. I really got into the story just from that. Seemed like a typical rainy day. It's raining here now and I could just look ...

Whoa! What's up with the gun? That is the point where you run like heck and call the police. That or bluff your way out of it, don't get shot, ...

but in two-and-a-half weeks she was in the back of a red pickup kissing some guy on the neck. But then, that is a little odd. Perhaps just round it ...

I love the pure, raw grittiness that this has. It was rife with errors - mostly punctuation - but the potential of this thing just blew me away. Absolutely knocked ...

Welcome to Young Writers Society! Yes, there is a 2:1 required ratio for posting your own work. (You have to leave 2 reviews for someone else's work to every 1 ...

Yeah, I'd have to agree with chocoholic that the first part really didn't connect well with the second and third, but as you say, this is from bygone days and ...

Hey and welcome to Young Writers Society! You seemed to have posted in the right area and it's great to be reading you for the first time! Now onto the ...

The emotion in this was really great. When I first started reading it, I was like "oh great, another stupid sex story." But this had so much heart to it. ...