Griffinkeeper

I don't thing the weapons are really appropriate either. Werewolves can only be killed by shooting them through the heart with a silver bullet. A katana or a whip are ...

Just for the record: If I don't mention something it means A) Someone already covered it or B)I missed it or C) It is good.

I like the pompous style of your bureaucrat, it was kind of fun to read. Hmm. This passes my prologue axe because it is a letter. Which is kind of ...

This is definitely a new low...

He isn't?

I really never do care much for titles. If I did pay attention... As a general rule (for me anyway) if I don't see any gender specified I default on ...

Gryphons? Gryphons! Gryphons like this one[ ? SWEET!

At the end you wrote. "Who are you?" it asked me. Is that supposed to be the griffon talking? And why is the griffon like a wrestling referee? dont the ...

I can't help you because you: A) Didn't include the name of the book. B) Didn't include a short summary of the book.

I think she is deleting all her work because she is leaving YWS. It's over something real stupid, a bad review.

Er... does anyone else have any comments?

Do all the Orks talk like Mr. T?

I've edited it according to your recommendations Snoink. The two people were having a most peculiar argument. Thankfully, I missed most of it because I was busy staring down at ...

I'll make sure to clarify it. Thanks for the input.

Pounds, in this case, is both a measurement of value and weight. 2000 pounds is 2000 pounds of gold.