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Re: all you provided for me
I'm working off my phone so I hope this works I read a section and I write my thoughts each paragraph I've written below corresponds with the way you have ...
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Re: a human's purpose
I write reviews as I read the work being reviewed. I read a paragraph and then I write what I'm thinking about it. Each paragraph written below corresponds as a ...
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Re: little dizzies
Deeper meaning resides in the eye of the beholder— writing a picture, shaping words to show, not tell, etching emotion into ink and air. Reading the same lines, over and ...
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Re: The Last Day
Hello! GreyHound26 here. Here to write another review. Welcome to our humble website. It’s like social media—like the book of faces or the one that used to sound like a ...
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Re: Iris and the Minotaur - Chapter 2/8 [Ink-stained Maiden]
Hello! GreyHound26 here. It’s been a while since I’ve done any reviews, but here I am, ready to dive back in. As always, I read and write the review simultaneously, ...
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Re: Iris and the Minotaur - Chapter 1/8 [The Labyrinth]
Hello! GreyHound26 here. It’s been a while since I’ve done any reviews, but here I am, ready to dive back in. As always, I read and write the review simultaneously, ...
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Re: Ink on Paper
Hello JSadler thank you for posting. its Intimidating to post at first in the short time i have been on this site. i have learned this Community is very Accepting. ...
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Re: One Year, Fourteen Days: Chapter Five
Hello IrishPride13 Back again Reminder I wright my reviews as I Read them because I'm scatterbrained I try to Review each paragraph and what it makes me think and/or feel. ...
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Re: One Year, Fourteen Days: Chapter Four
Irish Pride 13 here back for another one. :P I write my reviews and thought real time so if it is a little Confusing sorry. I try to write each ...
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Re: One Year, Fourteen Days: Chapter Three
IrishPride13 here, sharing my thoughts as I read. I like to write these reviews in real-time, so my comments are aligned with the paragraphs in the text. Regarding the motion ...
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Re: One Year, Fourteen Days: Chapter Two
Irish back again. I'll tell you walk my thought are as i read each paragraph. As someone who once had to endure "Barbie Girl" on repeat, I can empathize with ...
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Re: Devine Retribution
I'm writing this review as I read the passage. Right after get go it feels like I'm reading a poem about addiction. And then it wanders into a battle with ...
Nov 4, 2023 -
Re: One Year, Fourteen Days: Chapter One
I'm writing a couple sentences after I read each paragraph. So each time there's a deliberate break it's a different paragraph I've read. You had me hooked right from the ...
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Re: Goodbye My First Car
I remember my first start this off bay say sorry for your losses Some call it crazy mourning a machine. You sort poem highlights the connection between you and your ...
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Re: She was the Sun, He was the Moon
this poem gave me the impression of a popular girl meeting a nerdy guy that doesn't rely care about her. then she changes to try and get his attentions but ...
Jul 21, 2023
