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Irishpride13

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: all you provided for me

    I'm working off my phone so I hope this works I read a section and I write my thoughts each paragraph I've written below corresponds with the way you have ...

    Feb 4, 2025
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: a human's purpose

    I write reviews as I read the work being reviewed. I read a paragraph and then I write what I'm thinking about it. Each paragraph written below corresponds as a ...

    Feb 4, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: little dizzies

    Deeper meaning resides in the eye of the beholder— writing a picture, shaping words to show, not tell, etching emotion into ink and air. Reading the same lines, over and ...

    Feb 4, 2025
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Last Day

    Hello! GreyHound26 here. Here to write another review. Welcome to our humble website. It’s like social media—like the book of faces or the one that used to sound like a ...

    Oct 6, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Iris and the Minotaur - Chapter 2/8 [Ink-stained Maiden]

    Hello! GreyHound26 here. It’s been a while since I’ve done any reviews, but here I am, ready to dive back in. As always, I read and write the review simultaneously, ...

    Sep 29, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Iris and the Minotaur - Chapter 1/8 [The Labyrinth]

    Hello! GreyHound26 here. It’s been a while since I’ve done any reviews, but here I am, ready to dive back in. As always, I read and write the review simultaneously, ...

    Sep 29, 2024
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Ink on Paper

    Hello JSadler thank you for posting. its Intimidating to post at first in the short time i have been on this site. i have learned this Community is very Accepting. ...

    Jan 5, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: One Year, Fourteen Days: Chapter Five

    Hello IrishPride13 Back again Reminder I wright my reviews as I Read them because I'm scatterbrained I try to Review each paragraph and what it makes me think and/or feel. ...

    Jan 5, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: One Year, Fourteen Days: Chapter Four

    Irish Pride 13 here back for another one. :P I write my reviews and thought real time so if it is a little Confusing sorry. I try to write each ...

    Nov 8, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: One Year, Fourteen Days: Chapter Three

    IrishPride13 here, sharing my thoughts as I read. I like to write these reviews in real-time, so my comments are aligned with the paragraphs in the text. Regarding the motion ...

    Nov 8, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: One Year, Fourteen Days: Chapter Two

    Irish back again. I'll tell you walk my thought are as i read each paragraph. As someone who once had to endure "Barbie Girl" on repeat, I can empathize with ...

    Nov 6, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Devine Retribution

    I'm writing this review as I read the passage. Right after get go it feels like I'm reading a poem about addiction. And then it wanders into a battle with ...

    Nov 4, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: One Year, Fourteen Days: Chapter One

    I'm writing a couple sentences after I read each paragraph. So each time there's a deliberate break it's a different paragraph I've read. You had me hooked right from the ...

    Nov 4, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Goodbye My First Car

    I remember my first start this off bay say sorry for your losses Some call it crazy mourning a machine. You sort poem highlights the connection between you and your ...

    Jul 25, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: She was the Sun, He was the Moon

    this poem gave me the impression of a popular girl meeting a nerdy guy that doesn't rely care about her. then she changes to try and get his attentions but ...

    Jul 21, 2023


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