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Katie Frain

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Daisies: Prologue

    Hello, Tulip here to give you a review, as I still procrastinate on a paper that is due tonight! This is an interesting way to open up to a novel, ...

    Mar 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: Val: 2

    Hello, Tulip here to give you a review on this chapter. I noticed that even though we are introduced to the character the Main character is talking about you don't ...

    Mar 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: Val: 1

    Hello, Tulip here to give you a review on your chapter! it is a different story for sure. I'm not sure what exactly you are taking this but I'm going ...

    Mar 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Elodie Bones: Chapter 1: 9 Years Later

    Hello, Tulip here to give you a review on Chapter 1! I am currently procrastinating on an essay I have to write for my Humanities class, so I thought I'd ...

    Mar 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Wild and Free

    Hello, Tulip here to give you a review on your poem "Wild and Free". I liked this poem/song which ever you'd prefer to use. It had a nice message to ...

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: The Things We Do For Love

    Hello, Tulip here to give you a review on your short story. I liked how you went from explaining the scene and what exactly was happening to plan on how ...

    Feb 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Why Did You Leave Me Like That

    Hello, I'm here to give you a review on your poem "Why did you leave me like that". I do highly suggest editing your title so it is not completely ...

    Feb 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Adaline's Broken - Part One

    Hello, Tulip here to give you a review on your chapter today. Okay, so the way you have paragraphs formatted aren't a bad thing, but you should try to keep ...

    Feb 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: This is ode to night pleas give feed back

    Hello, Sky (I'm just going to call you Sky), I'm Tulip and I'm here to give you a review on your poem. I am just going to come right out ...

    Feb 9, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The New Life Program

    Hello, Tulip here to give you a review on your piece! I liked how you described the town as being boring, everyone doing the same thing like clockwork every day. ...

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Memoir

    Hello, Tulip here to give you a review on your piece! Okay I'm going to be breaking this review into different segments. Just to help keep me organized. Spelling/Grammar Errors ...

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Don't Let them Know

    Good morning! Tulip here to review your short poem. I liked the piece. It has simple language but it had a bigger impact on the feelings of the reader, I ...

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Rememberence

    Hello, I'm Tulip and I'm here to give you a review on your poem. I liked your poem but it is a bit long how you have it formatted. I ...

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Rebel:Soldier - Book Trailer

    Heyo Messenger, Tulip here to give you a review! I really liked this a lot. There was a lot of detail and a good amount of action portrayed within a ...

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Beyond -- Prologue

    Hi, so I really liked this. It caught my attention rather well and kept it through out. I like how you set up the environment without blatantly saying it. Your ...

    Jan 11, 2016


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