GreenTulip

Okay, GreenTulip is here to give you a review. If I can give you some advice on somethings, I will be doing so. You don't have to take the advice, ...

I am confused. This is poetry, but it's not formatted like it. so shall i say it can go like this: It's an interesting thing that happened to the light, ...

okay.....i am going to be doing this.....you need this in stanzas. I am going to show you how you can do this. I will first show you how you have ...

1. Get rid of the long paragraph's that you have in this chapter. I didn't even want to read it, for they were so long. And I didn't because they ...

1. Your chapters are much to short. They hold to many things in them, and it flows to fast in such a small space. Try to lengthen out your chapters. ...

Okay, I like how this chapter was a flashback for Aria. It shows some of her history, and the connection between her and Nathan. But again with the announcement of ...

okay..I am resednig this because I don't know if you got it or not... Wow, this poem doesn't just show the relationship between two best friends but it could also ...

Wow. This is .......I really do't know how to explain it. But it is well written, but in some places it goes way to fast. Just try to slow down ...

Hello TinyJarStoredDreams, this is GreenTulip and I am here to offer you a review. This is well done, and it could go well with a poem that I wrote a ...

Okay, this is long, and I am I browsed through your story. It is good from what I read. The length is long...and the marking it as a short story...doesn't ...

Okay....i am going to do something....now DO NOT get pissed at me for this.. When you’re so in love with a person that You find your thoughts F A L ...

okay, I am going to offer you a piece of advice on how you can split this into stanza's. Here, have a piece of my heart. Didn’t you know it ...

"Why not paint the roses blue?" It is used to much in the poem you have written. I think that it is. It is used six times in the space ...

This is a wonderful poem. Now quoting what the people beneath have said: BloodinkSeesFootage says... I love the idea here, of something that looks like an Ancient Greek battle. Your ...

I loved this poem. It is well written, and will only need a few corrections that I am going to put in this review. Okay, my name is GreenTulip, and ...