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Re: The Origin of Valentine's Day
An interesting piece, but if you want to call this an essay, it should be a lot more organized. Sorry, habit is forcing me to organize essays in a certain ...
Feb 14, 2014 -
Re: A Mother's Love
Hmmm, I don't seem to be following what exactly is going on here. But I can correct somethings. 1. Place Outside of the station, Camille’s eyes filled with tears....... Camille ...
Feb 14, 2014 -
Re: How about...NO!!!!
Hi, GreenTulip here for a review of How about...No! I am going to be very straight forward with this review. 1. I hate the repetition of the constant...NO!. For one ...
Feb 13, 2014 -
Re: The Winchesters
Hi GreenTulip here to give you a review on this fanfiction. So it is good but I saw something that needs to be fixed. He took a step forward to ...
Feb 10, 2014 -
Re: i am don.
Okay, okay...Hi Strange, Tulip here to give you a review, on this lovely night/day- take your chose on which one from wherever you are (Well it's technically a lovely night ...
Feb 10, 2014 -
Re: My Sweet Symphony.
Hi, GreenTulip here for a review. I am sure that you had something in mind when writing this. It rings with emotion high within it's words. You managed to paint ...
Feb 10, 2014 -
Re: For the Love of a Life
Hello, GreenTulip here for a review. So I would usually find a way to eventually work to this point but I am sorry it took away from everything in the ...
Feb 8, 2014 -
Re: Hollow
Well I don't know to much about Haiku's///wait what I am I saying...I know nothing about them. But I am here to give you a review on the lovely words ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Mind over matter (18+)
Hi, GreenTulip here to offer you some advice with a review. 1. Do not just ramble through ideas in your paragraphs. If you switch ideas...make a new paragraph. It will ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: A Smile of Light
Hi Timmyjake, GreenTulip here to give you a review. First of all, I loved this poem. This is amazing. Okay, maybe I should I get to the actual review part. ...
Feb 3, 2014 -
Re: Prologue
Hello, GreenTulip here to leave you a review. This may be harsh to start with, but you need to EDIT this into separate paragraphs. They are no paragraphs, and you ...
Feb 3, 2014 -
Re: The In-Between; Part 1
Hello, GreenTulip here to give you a review. So this is a very long part of a book. I mean it is good, but in some places the details do ...
Feb 3, 2014 -
Re: On Fire
Hi, this is GreenTulip here to give you a review on this piece of poetry as requested. Some people will format there reviews in a set 1. I like 2. ...
Feb 2, 2014 -
Re: Hope
Hello, GreenTulip here to leave you a review. Okay...there are some things that I will advice you to do, but i am not going to do those right now. Right ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: Mercy
Wow, this poem is very powerful Strange. The stpry behind the shooting is both sad yet hopeful, that some guys will listen to their wife's last wishes. The one's that ...
Jan 27, 2014
