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Hi there. Thanks a lot for those nitpicks and your insight about what Gwen is. What I was going for with the ambiguity was a situation where the reader could ...

Very cool! Do it, buddy!

...I'm cute! XD Nice poem this played with some very interesting ideas concerning gender and societal standards for the different sexes. ;)

LOL I just read the squirrel cadets comment. You my friend, are comical.

Hey there. Thanks for this review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for Gwen, I kept her form ambiguous because I wanted to let readers form their own speculations about ...

Hey! thanks for reviewing this chapter as well! I'm glad you liked the ending! To be quite honest, I am considering somehow dropping the hallucination altogether. I kinda just zoned ...

Hi there. Thanks for this review! Your insight is much appreciated. :)

Woah. I see. That's really cool! I loved it! :D I'm glad I could help u.

Hahahaha! This was amazing. You are already one of the best humor writers on this site! (I'm my opinion) Keep it up! ;D

Wow! I never knew there was a difference! Thanks so much for your insight. :)

Hahaha. Thanks for this review. This was too funny to read.

Lol. Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :) I'm a teenager too currently learning to drive and it's insane because I am just so much better than most ppl in ...

That was D E E P !!! Nice poem here. Beautiful descriptions.

Hahahaha. This is really funny. Good stuff. :)

Yes you are right. :) Cut back on the in between descriptions but make sure that your reader can still easily identify the speaker. Sometimes having it feel like a ...