GreenLight24

Hahah. Agreed. I will definitely take your opinions into account. When I wrote this, I had just finished reading some of the correspondences of Abigail Adams, and me, being a ...

Oh it's fine. I take no offense to ur suggestion. Thanks for the feedback. But I'm pretty sure her mother did speak in the mirror scene. The reason I chose ...

Wow thanks a lot you had a lot to say! I agree about the dialogue and the description feedback. And yeah the age thing was because I went back and ...

Np. Hmu if u need any others! :D

LMAO. Love this! Great job!

Thanks a lot for this review! :D I'm really glad that u liked it! I always wanted to tap into this kind of storyline haha. As for Cosmo and Wanda, ...

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Thanks! :D I see what u mean. Tbh I just found it hard to bring myself to say the word ejaculate XD. On the verb tense there, I meant to ...

Okay. Thanks for ur opinion! :D

Any time. Hmu if u need more reviews!!!

Gotcha! ;) Now that I think about it, i see what you mean about the roses and vicky playing hide and seek. And yeah, I often felt like those nouns ...

Yeah.... i'm more of a dog person...funny little poem though. I enjoyed this. ;D

Hahaha. Thanks. Literally if we never find a cure for aids we can blame Dinkleberg. XD

Thanks so much for checking this out! :D I really appreciate the suggestions here. I think that a flashback explanation would be very effective in moving this forward. Changing Timmy's ...

Anything helps! Thanks for the complimenents. If I do continue this piece, the character development will be a large part of improving upon this start, so thanks alot for addressing ...