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Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter Nine: Adrian Kingston and Frey's Fatal Failure
Hey there, RoyalHighness. GreenLight24 here with a review for you on this lovely saturday afternoon! :D Before I get into the constructive criticisms, I'll just spazz about everything that I ...
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: History Boys
Hey there, Blackwood! GreenLight24 here with a review for you in this stupendous Saturday morning! :) Just as a side note, I haven't read any of the other chapters from ...
May 31, 2014 -
Re: one last day
Hahahaha! Hey, there! GreenLight24 here with a review for you on this super Saturday morning! :) This is my second review after a pretty long period of reviewing inactivity, so ...
May 31, 2014 -
Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter Five (I)
Hi there! I'm here to review this chapter for you! :D I saw that this one was one of the chapters with fewer reviews so I went ahead and tackled ...
May 30, 2014 -
Re: Removed
Hey there, Kayforthenight! GreenLight24 here with the first review for you on this Amazing April Review Day! :D *clears throat* *sighs* First off, these are some really cool ideas you've ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Salvation of Ignorance - Chapter 4: Previous Tomfoolery
Hey there, rawrafied! GreenLight24 here with the first review for you on this Amazing April Review Day!!! *warmup stretches* Okay! So, the first thing that hit me about this chapter ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Renatus - chapter five
Alsace, Alsace, Alsace, Alsace, Alsace, Alsace!!! (instead of Versace) *realizes you might not have gotten that joke* *sighs* *realizes you might have gotten it* *fist pumps* ANYWAYS, Wasup, Laure! Gr
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Corps of Recovery: Part 5
Hello there, Buggiedude2340! GreenLight24 here with your first review (and my first review of the day) on this amazing April Review Day! :D *clears throat* Before we get into the ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Slowly Falling
Wazz poppin', Mynameswriter!? GreenLight24 here with a review for you on this magnificent Monday night! :) *clears throat* The very first thing that hit me about this poem was (drumroll ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: Small Fire
Hey there, Skylarembers! GreenLight24 here with a review for you on this fine Monday afternoon. :) First off, I commend you for the concepts behind this poem. "A poem about ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (Chapter 1-1)
Hey there! This is even awesomer than before! I see you fixed some of the syntax during the scene where O goes to fight the monster. Nice job! :) I ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: Pull the Trigger
Hiya! Here's another review for you on this fine Thursday night! :D *clears throat* *Morgan Freeman voice* First of all, this is an awesomely-done suspense story. In my belief, the ...
Apr 18, 2014 -
Re: Love or lust?
Hey there! GreenLight24 here with a review for you, representing team blue with a review for you as we continue I push through in his magnificent March review day! ;) ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Loneliness
Hey there! GreenLight24 here with a review for you, representing team blue as we of tubule to push through to the end of this magnificent March review day! :D First ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Hospice
Hey there! GreenLight24 here with a review for you, representing team blue on this magnificent March review day! :D First, I really liked the way you paced this story. Often ...
Mar 30, 2014