Hey there! GreenLight24 here with a review for you, representing team blue with a review for you as we continue I push through in his magnificent March review day!
First if all, this work was really cool. I know it's not listed as one, but I felt like the poetic elements of this story were reminiscent of poetry itself. Your descriptive talents were definitely working hard here and your imagery was great. I loves the whole image of the single beam of moonlight shining in through the window. That was awesome. As far as constructive criticism goes, I think you could go even further with that imagery and turn this into a real work of art. Happy review day! I hope this helps you and remember, never ever stop writing!
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