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Re: The Color of Pain
Hey there. I'm new to dis...but here's a review! Haikus are awesome. They are always really short. But they pack a punch. (yes these first three sentences are a haiku ...
Aug 27, 2013 -
Re: Silver Night
Hey there. Review for ya. I absolutely love this poem. Fantastic job with the descriptive wording and figurative language. I especially like your line: "Silver beams of frozen moonlight kiss ...
Aug 27, 2013 -
Re: Requiem of an Immortal Soul
Whatsup! Im new to this site, but imma try my hand at a review for ya. I like the way that this poem is executed, and I like your descriptions ...
Aug 27, 2013 -
Re: I Wanted
Hiya! Review for ya! I like this, and think it's very creative, the reason being that we all experience writer's block, and everyone on this site can probably relate to ...
Aug 27, 2013 -
Re: Dreamer and dreams.
Woah. Nice little poem. I like the way you descirbed dreams as sort of a paradox in the last four lines. I also like how you turned a dream into ...
Aug 26, 2013 -
Re: Why Our Hands Are Always Clean
Wow! I really like this. I love the way the words seemed to dance around a bit, and I loved the way you kind of told a story with each ...
Aug 26, 2013 -
Re: Proudly Psychopathic
Wow. Okay. Nice. I like the way that you put us into the mind of the psychopath, and let the atmosphere take hold. It's always very refreshing to read a ...
Aug 26, 2013 -
Re: She Felt Cold
Wooo! I liked this one a lot. I like the way you described all of those....dead things. Very good choice of adjectives, especially when describing the dead Emma vs. the ...
Aug 26, 2013
