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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Color of Pain

    Hey there. I'm new to dis...but here's a review! Haikus are awesome. They are always really short. But they pack a punch. (yes these first three sentences are a haiku ...

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Silver Night

    Hey there. Review for ya. I absolutely love this poem. Fantastic job with the descriptive wording and figurative language. I especially like your line: "Silver beams of frozen moonlight kiss ...

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Requiem of an Immortal Soul

    Whatsup! Im new to this site, but imma try my hand at a review for ya. I like the way that this poem is executed, and I like your descriptions ...

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: I Wanted

    Hiya! Review for ya! I like this, and think it's very creative, the reason being that we all experience writer's block, and everyone on this site can probably relate to ...

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dreamer and dreams.

    Woah. Nice little poem. I like the way you descirbed dreams as sort of a paradox in the last four lines. I also like how you turned a dream into ...

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why Our Hands Are Always Clean

    Wow! I really like this. I love the way the words seemed to dance around a bit, and I loved the way you kind of told a story with each ...

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Proudly Psychopathic

    Wow. Okay. Nice. I like the way that you put us into the mind of the psychopath, and let the atmosphere take hold. It's always very refreshing to read a ...

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Romantic Re: She Felt Cold

    Wooo! I liked this one a lot. I like the way you described all of those....dead things. Very good choice of adjectives, especially when describing the dead Emma vs. the ...

    Aug 26, 2013


“I am not worried, Harry," said Dumbledore, his voice a little stronger despite the freezing water. "I am with you.”
— Albus Dumbledore, Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince