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Re: I am me
Hiya! Happy review day. (3 min of it left!!!) I really liked what you said with this poem. I especially live the message of self love and self glorification even ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: Tricks
Hey! Happy review day! I decided id go ahead and check out this poem. First of all, there were a lot of things I liked about this work. I like ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: Paper Girl
Wow this was incredible. Review for you. :) First of all, this is a great poem which possesses a beautiful central metaphor. (That of comparing the girl to paper, which ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: Dreaming.
Hey there. GreenLight24 here with a review for you. First of all, I've got to say I got quite a kick out of this poem. I found it to be ...
Sep 7, 2013 -
Re: Thin.
Hey there. Review for you. :) I like the ideas that you bring up in this poem. I especially like the idea of taking environmental problems such as the hole ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: Sheridan Holmes: Home Sweet Holmes PART 1
Whatsup! Review for ya!!! This is very nicely written, and this seems like a very captivating series. I'm not really well versed in the whole Sherlock thing, but it does ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: A Girl and Her Bird
Wow. Awesome. Review for ya. Hahaha. I found this to be really entertaining, and I liked the way that the story was told from the bird's point of view. It's ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: Lighthouse
Hey there Liaya! Review for you here. First off, nice poem. :) I like the way this was formatted and I greatly enjoyed the ideas that came out in this ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: A Little Piece of You
Whatsup! Back for another review! I gotta say that, so far, I love the works that you've been putting up. Your language and discourse flow very nicely and your word ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: The Other Me
Hey there. Nice poem. Review for ya. I really liked the idea that you were trying to get out there with this poem. I thought it was fantastic. I enjoyed ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: You think you want to be a writer? No you don't.
Woooh! This was amazing!!! I absolutely loved the message that u were trying to send with this and I loved the way you brought it out of the text! After ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: Ghost
Whats up. Review for ya. I like this poem, and i think all the constructive criticisms have already been made, so I guess I'll just tell ya the things I ...
Aug 28, 2013 -
Re: Hope.
Hey there. GL24 here with a review for ya. I really like the way this poem came at me. I sort of interpreted this as a poem from one person ...
Aug 28, 2013 -
Re: Mother
Hey whats up. I though I'd do a review for u! :D So here it is! First off, there were a lot of things about this story that I really ...
Aug 28, 2013 -
Re: The prologue of my new novel. (no title yet)
Hey there! GL24 on dis review haha. I really like this prologue, and I see this story coming together very nicely. I like the language that you use to describe ...
Aug 28, 2013
