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  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I am me

    Hiya! Happy review day. (3 min of it left!!!) I really liked what you said with this poem. I especially live the message of self love and self glorification even ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tricks

    Hey! Happy review day! I decided id go ahead and check out this poem. First of all, there were a lot of things I liked about this work. I like ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Paper Girl

    Wow this was incredible. Review for you. :) First of all, this is a great poem which possesses a beautiful central metaphor. (That of comparing the girl to paper, which ...

    Sep 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dreaming.

    Hey there. GreenLight24 here with a review for you. First of all, I've got to say I got quite a kick out of this poem. I found it to be ...

    Sep 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Thin.

    Hey there. Review for you. :) I like the ideas that you bring up in this poem. I especially like the idea of taking environmental problems such as the hole ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Sheridan Holmes: Home Sweet Holmes PART 1

    Whatsup! Review for ya!!! This is very nicely written, and this seems like a very captivating series. I'm not really well versed in the whole Sherlock thing, but it does ...

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: A Girl and Her Bird

    Wow. Awesome. Review for ya. Hahaha. I found this to be really entertaining, and I liked the way that the story was told from the bird's point of view. It's ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Lighthouse

    Hey there Liaya! Review for you here. First off, nice poem. :) I like the way this was formatted and I greatly enjoyed the ideas that came out in this ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Little Piece of You

    Whatsup! Back for another review! I gotta say that, so far, I love the works that you've been putting up. Your language and discourse flow very nicely and your word ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: The Other Me

    Hey there. Nice poem. Review for ya. I really liked the idea that you were trying to get out there with this poem. I thought it was fantastic. I enjoyed ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: You think you want to be a writer? No you don't.

    Woooh! This was amazing!!! I absolutely loved the message that u were trying to send with this and I loved the way you brought it out of the text! After ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ghost

    Whats up. Review for ya. I like this poem, and i think all the constructive criticisms have already been made, so I guess I'll just tell ya the things I ...

    Aug 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Hope.

    Hey there. GL24 here with a review for ya. I really like the way this poem came at me. I sort of interpreted this as a poem from one person ...

    Aug 28, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mother

    Hey whats up. I though I'd do a review for u! :D So here it is! First off, there were a lot of things about this story that I really ...

    Aug 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Romantic Re: The prologue of my new novel. (no title yet)

    Hey there! GL24 on dis review haha. I really like this prologue, and I see this story coming together very nicely. I like the language that you use to describe ...

    Aug 28, 2013


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