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Sorry, accidentally only posted half of my chapter. I fixed it

My essay does support my thesis. You completely took statements from here and tore them apart, then twisted them to convey ideas that are COMPLETELY besides the point. So no. ...

Lucky for you, I'm working on Chapter 6 right now :)

thank you so much. This means a lot :)

I appreciate the review but again, the KKK was an extremist group. You're totally write that I need to clean this up. What I meant by that quote was that ...

Omg am I seriously ahead of you? YAY! (No offense)

Timothy, even if you did nitpick and tear my writing apart, coming from you, it really does mean a lot. And this really did make me feel better. You always ...

I was trying to read through this but there seems to be a lack of rhythm. I really didn't like this. Sorry, it's nothing you did wrong just personal preference.

Thanks Iggy, oh and by the way, I love the Purge :)

Awww thanks :)

I appreciate all your comments and I see where you're coming from. Being me, I understand why I included all the lines. I promise it wasn't supposed to be forced. ...

Rude!

You just don't need parenthesis as punctuation. The stuff in between was good :)

Hit shift and then enter. Make sure its shift first and you hold it down while you press enter. That equals one return.

WHEN DOES THE NEXT CHAPTER COME OUT????