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Re: .
I really enjoyed this poem. Not despite the lack of capitalization, but I think BECAUSE of it. I really must applaud your choice to not use capitalization. It was certainly ...
Oct 17, 2014 -
Re: The Blue Dandelion
Heya! Gravity here for a review. I was previously Defyingravity01, just got my username changed. (I sortof have to put that in the beginning of all my reviews since the ...
Oct 13, 2014 -
Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Five)
Heya! Gravity here for yet another review! Let me just say that I'm going to be very sad when I reach Chapter 10. Very sad indeed. he left a pile ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Four)
Hello. I've said this several times, if you're sick of my reviews, just let me know. Anyway, I'm Gravity as usual so yeah. That's that. I really haven't been finding ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Three)
Hey! Gravity here with yet ANOTHER Review. You've sucked me in, what can I say? I love that you started out by describing what Effie is feeling. I'm not that ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Two)
Hey! Gravity here for another review. If you get sick of my reviews, let me know. “Ah shit… Shit, shit, shit,” Robbie mumbles. Small error. The "shit" after the ellipse ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)
Hey! Gravity here for a review! I saw the second chapter of this in the greenroom, so I decided to check out Chapter 1 I'm reviewing as I go along, ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Hide and Make Pizza
So this piece was good but it had a lot of mistakes and was just a tad bit cliche. This review isn't all negative, so I want to address the ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Is Everything Okay Upstairs- How Cowboy Boots Can Change Your Life
I really liked this. I liked that you included the picture as a visual for what your cowboy boots specifically looked like. I've gone through what you go through. Instead ...
Sep 16, 2014 -
Re: Why Christianity Is A Lie: A Comprehensive Breakdown of the Failures Within Christianity Part 1
You know what? Some Christians suck. I'll give you that. Westborough Baptist Church, extremists, we get it. There are extremists in every religion but you know what? Most of the ...
Sep 11, 2014 -
Re: Rose
This is kinda freaky. In an amazing way, actually. In your description you wrote "Thoughts on unrequited love." And you titled your piece Rose. I literally wrote a short story ...
Sep 8, 2014 -
Re: Devious
Hello. So this is a pretty long piece. The first thing I'm going to say is that you should probably have split it up into sections. It looks kind of ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Tomorrow- Chapter Seven
Hi! Gravity here for a review. I haven't read the rest of the chapters to your novel, so I'm pretty much just going to be correcting grammar and more technical ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Against the Blizzard
Hello! Gravity here! I hope you're having a happy review day. I saw this was a historical piece and it made me read it. I think in the Author's Note ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: August: Prologue
I really enjoyed this chapter. I thought the idea of your novel was a very creative one and I thought it was also very cute! However, it was also incredibly ...
Aug 31, 2014
