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Re: The Birthday Candles
Hello! Gravity here for a review! I'm going to review this first as I read, and then give general overall impressions! Her father caught her trying to clean up once, ...
Jul 24, 2021 -
Re: Waking up.
Thank you so much for your vulnerability. I struggle with mental illness, as well. I have several diagnoses and I understand how difficult it is to battle your mind on ...
Jul 24, 2021 -
Re: One Turn Past Loose - Part One
Hey Shady! I'm back on YWS after a long hiatus. I was perusing the "shorts" section when I saw your story and that it only had one review. So I ...
Jul 25, 2018 -
Re: ...
Okay... So I'm a Christian but I have a major, major problem with pretty much everything in your blog post. I can't really call it an article or an essay ...
May 8, 2017 -
Re: My Friend, The Painting (Part 1)
Hey Dracula, Gravity here for a review! Oh. My. Gosh. First let me say, your description was uh-may-zing . Yes, I did just say that like a typical highschool girl ...
Mar 13, 2017 -
Re: Rachel and Matt IMPROVED
Hey Ferruccio! Gravity here to give you a review! Okay, so I'm going to start off by saying you have a really good bare bones structure of a short story, ...
Mar 13, 2017 -
Re: 5:46pm/35mm
Heya! Gravity here for a review So I just wanted to say I thought this poem was really cool and I like how abstract it was. However, it's almost as ...
Mar 2, 2017 -
Re: A Book That Could Change The World
Hey, Gravity here for a review! I made the mistake of reading this without looking at the genre first. I didn't know it was satire until I got to the ...
Feb 9, 2017 -
Re: Payment for Independence
Hey, Gravity here for a review! SirLight, I just want to say this poem was very different from many others I have seen: which I really loved. I think this ...
Feb 9, 2017 -
Re: Him...
Hiya, Gravity here for a review! So love poems are obviously not a genre that is unique or new, therefore, it's important to try and make what you put in ...
Jan 17, 2017 -
Re: Costco Conversation
Heya! Gravity here to leave you a review! So this piece was fairly short, therefore, this review will be fairly short as well. The first thing I would like to ...
Jan 5, 2017 -
Re: Homosexuality Based On the Way Our Country Was Founded With a Biblical Perspective
Heya, Gravity here for a review! This is a topic that is widely covered, so my review is going to be a bit harsh. I apologize for that in advance. ...
Dec 13, 2016 -
Re: 9:44 PM on a Tuesday
Hey there! Gravity here for a review! So I really love this poem. It was very... whimsical? Not really sure what else to describe it as. It was really really ...
Aug 31, 2016 -
Re: Divergent- A poetic diatribe.
Heya, Gravity here! So I feel really strange reviewing this because it's a rant. If you want constructive criticism, I shall provide it in a spoiler. you may choose to ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: The "Friends of Faith Thrift Store"
Heya! Gravity here for a review :) So, this poem just sort of seems like a jumble of randomness. I respect poems and poets that don't necessarily feel the need ...
Aug 28, 2016
