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  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: The Birthday Candles

    Hello! Gravity here for a review! I'm going to review this first as I read, and then give general overall impressions! Her father caught her trying to clean up once, ...

    Jul 24, 2021
  • Short Story » Health, Narrative Re: Waking up.

    Thank you so much for your vulnerability. I struggle with mental illness, as well. I have several diagnoses and I understand how difficult it is to battle your mind on ...

    Jul 24, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: One Turn Past Loose - Part One

    Hey Shady! I'm back on YWS after a long hiatus. I was perusing the "shorts" section when I saw your story and that it only had one review. So I ...

    Jul 25, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Spiritual Re: ...

    Okay... So I'm a Christian but I have a major, major problem with pretty much everything in your blog post. I can't really call it an article or an essay ...

    May 8, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: My Friend, The Painting (Part 1)

    Hey Dracula, Gravity here for a review! Oh. My. Gosh. First let me say, your description was uh-may-zing . Yes, I did just say that like a typical highschool girl ...

    Mar 13, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Review Re: Rachel and Matt IMPROVED

    Hey Ferruccio! Gravity here to give you a review! Okay, so I'm going to start off by saying you have a really good bare bones structure of a short story, ...

    Mar 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: 5:46pm/35mm

    Heya! Gravity here for a review So I just wanted to say I thought this poem was really cool and I like how abstract it was. However, it's almost as ...

    Mar 2, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Other, Satire Re: A Book That Could Change The World

    Hey, Gravity here for a review! I made the mistake of reading this without looking at the genre first. I didn't know it was satire until I got to the ...

    Feb 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Payment for Independence

    Hey, Gravity here for a review! SirLight, I just want to say this poem was very different from many others I have seen: which I really loved. I think this ...

    Feb 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Him...

    Hiya, Gravity here for a review! So love poems are obviously not a genre that is unique or new, therefore, it's important to try and make what you put in ...

    Jan 17, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Costco Conversation

    Heya! Gravity here to leave you a review! So this piece was fairly short, therefore, this review will be fairly short as well. The first thing I would like to ...

    Jan 5, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Spiritual Re: Homosexuality Based On the Way Our Country Was Founded With a Biblical Perspective

    Heya, Gravity here for a review! This is a topic that is widely covered, so my review is going to be a bit harsh. I apologize for that in advance. ...

    Dec 13, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 9:44 PM on a Tuesday

    Hey there! Gravity here for a review! So I really love this poem. It was very... whimsical? Not really sure what else to describe it as. It was really really ...

    Aug 31, 2016
  • Other » Review, Humor Re: Divergent- A poetic diatribe.

    Heya, Gravity here! So I feel really strange reviewing this because it's a rant. If you want constructive criticism, I shall provide it in a spoiler. you may choose to ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: The "Friends of Faith Thrift Store"

    Heya! Gravity here for a review :) So, this poem just sort of seems like a jumble of randomness. I respect poems and poets that don't necessarily feel the need ...

    Aug 28, 2016


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins