GrapeNerd

The format doesn't really help, but please bear with me.

This is very good, I did kind of get lost at some points. Anyway, your poem is short but perfect! The rhythm was smooth and there no unnecessary pauses. Anyway, ...

Hi, could you please try and be a bit more gentle in your reviews in the future? This is my first novel. By the way, there are different narrators in ...

Oh, by the way, the world here is like Middle Earth and Narnia mixed together.

Oh, by the way, the world here is like Middle Earth and Narnia mixed together.

Oh, by the way, the world here is like Middle Earth and Narnia mixed together.

Hi! Thanks so much for your review, actually, I was going to add more detail about the land in the next chapters so that the reader can have slowly, but ...

Wow, just, wow.

Please don't change anything in the future! I really like this!

Nice! Are you a Christian? Because if you are, well, I am too! I really like this because it is quite accurate. Seriously, I really really really like this! I ...

Oh wow, that was...wow. "She looked to her future and the creatures she would face below." I especially like this line, because it's the ending and it's just absolutely captivating! ...

This is awesome! I really liked it! The ending was hilarious. You've made a work of art, this poem was poetic and funny at the same time! Keep writing! I ...

Well, what can you do? This is my first short story/poem and this story was not inspired by anything, it just happened! Thank you for your review though!

Oh! Ok, I see now! Your capitalization and punctuation is flawless! I actually really like this poem!