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  • Short Story » General, Other Re: The Box

    Oh my goodness. This short story was beautifully written. The grammar was amazing, everything was amazing. "The irony of it all was so very disgusting. I ripped open the Box. ...

    Apr 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: To my Parents

    Wow! I really like this! I love how you put so much emotion in this! Though, I have to agree with Nargles, some lines were a bit out of the ...

    Apr 15, 2013
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: The Voice for the Voiceless

    Hi! First of, this poem is very well written, though you did miss a word in this sentence Can you see the sadness their eyes, ^ I love how you ...

    Apr 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My story

    I don't get this. Oddly enough, it feels kind of weird to me. The story is great, but the only thing that doesn't feel right is that she's in love ...

    Apr 12, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: what do you think of tourism in Europe

    Um...I don't live in Europe, though I do know someone who lives in Europe. Not so sure if that counts but hey, a lot of things don't count. Um, isn't ...

    Apr 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Hurt by my people

    I love this, I love this so much. I love how accurate this poem was. It may not be REALLY accurate, but it's true. You won't get what you want, ...

    Apr 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Realistic Re: dark waters

    I like this story, but some of your grammar and spelling needs a bit of a touch up. Also, I'm quite curious about the plot. I mean, I know it's ...

    Apr 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: The First Dimension: Prologue

    Oh, this looks interesting! One question though, what's the plot of this story? Because, I don't really understand anything right now. But, nonetheless, I think it's really good. I especially ...

    Apr 11, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Song of Mankind

    Oh my goodness! I love this! I love the concept of this poem, I don't rhyme words very well, but you do! I especially love the this stanza "With all ...

    Mar 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: How Am I To...

    Hiya! I'm going to attempt a review here, First off, I don't understand the concept, I can feel that it is something emotional but I just don't get it. Second, ...

    Mar 23, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Here Still

    Hi there, I'm going to try and write my first "long" review. First off, I don't get the whole, "wrapped in pages signed with red" thing. Though it's quite nice, ...

    Mar 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Don't Worry

    Hello! I would like to say that this here is a work of art. I love it. As I was reading it, the voice in my head sounded fragile and ...

    Mar 22, 2013


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