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Re: The Box
Oh my goodness. This short story was beautifully written. The grammar was amazing, everything was amazing. "The irony of it all was so very disgusting. I ripped open the Box. ...
Apr 30, 2013 -
Re: To my Parents
Wow! I really like this! I love how you put so much emotion in this! Though, I have to agree with Nargles, some lines were a bit out of the ...
Apr 15, 2013 -
Re: The Voice for the Voiceless
Hi! First of, this poem is very well written, though you did miss a word in this sentence Can you see the sadness their eyes, ^ I love how you ...
Apr 15, 2013 -
Re: My story
I don't get this. Oddly enough, it feels kind of weird to me. The story is great, but the only thing that doesn't feel right is that she's in love ...
Apr 12, 2013 -
Re: what do you think of tourism in Europe
Um...I don't live in Europe, though I do know someone who lives in Europe. Not so sure if that counts but hey, a lot of things don't count. Um, isn't ...
Apr 11, 2013 -
Re: Hurt by my people
I love this, I love this so much. I love how accurate this poem was. It may not be REALLY accurate, but it's true. You won't get what you want, ...
Apr 11, 2013 -
Re: dark waters
I like this story, but some of your grammar and spelling needs a bit of a touch up. Also, I'm quite curious about the plot. I mean, I know it's ...
Apr 11, 2013 -
Re: The First Dimension: Prologue
Oh, this looks interesting! One question though, what's the plot of this story? Because, I don't really understand anything right now. But, nonetheless, I think it's really good. I especially ...
Apr 11, 2013 -
Re: The Song of Mankind
Oh my goodness! I love this! I love the concept of this poem, I don't rhyme words very well, but you do! I especially love the this stanza "With all ...
Mar 23, 2013 -
Re: How Am I To...
Hiya! I'm going to attempt a review here, First off, I don't understand the concept, I can feel that it is something emotional but I just don't get it. Second, ...
Mar 23, 2013 -
Re: Here Still
Hi there, I'm going to try and write my first "long" review. First off, I don't get the whole, "wrapped in pages signed with red" thing. Though it's quite nice, ...
Mar 22, 2013 -
Re: Don't Worry
Hello! I would like to say that this here is a work of art. I love it. As I was reading it, the voice in my head sounded fragile and ...
Mar 22, 2013
