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Hi MattLang. This is a very sweet and somewhat simple love poem. I noticed that it becomes more detailed and complex as the poem continues. I'm not sure if that ...

Hi there Really really good. I love the title for starters; the phrase "caffeine nights" is really lovely. Your flow is really good. I think it can feel a bit ...

Hi there. I really like this. Your ability to translate chat speak to actual poetry is really good. It's really uplifting and witty and quite charming. I love your line ...

Hi Jenthrua I think writing fan fiction is really hard. I've seen this film a few times so I wanted to see if you could add a different angle or ...

Hi thestorygirl I really like this. Very original and interesting. When I first saw it I thought it was just going to be a simple description of a flower, but ...

Hi there. This is very good. I like it for a few reasons. Firstly, Your opening line is fantastic "I’m slowly losing control," It draws me in write away. Secondly, ...

Hi *singsoffkey* This is really good. A lot of people base poems and stories after family member. It can easily be corny and clichéd. This however is really good. Firstly, ...

Hi there This has potential but needs a little work. I think you need to expand on this. It has some very good lines and ideas in it but is ...

HI redpen123 This is quite good. It is very polished and effective, if somewhat bland. I felt like your opinions did not come through enough. I think you could have ...

This is really good. Opinion pieces are hard to write, especially something so stinging. Instead of just saying 'I don't like him and that is that' you gave examples and ...

Hi paulclover. As everyone else who reviewed this piece said, this is hilarious. It is also very witty and self-deprecating. I like that you did not shy away from the ...

This is absolutely fantastic. I'm not going to give you a full critique because I understand it's very personal. I'd just like to say this is beautiful, heartfelt and potent. ...

Hi HaydenMcaw. I like this poem but I think it could improve. Firstly, I don't think that the repetition does much for this poem. Repetition is hard to pull off ...

Hi inspiredlight. I really like this for a few reasons. Firstly, your opening sentence draws me in immediately. "Try as I might, I could not overcome the intense feeling I ...

Hi Greatman I actually really like this. And I really like that you used no capitalization, because it makes it feel a bit more surreal. You do however need to ...