Grace4life

Thank you so much for the tips i will go back to the poem and fix the poem and try make it more clear. I really appreciate your review i ...

Thanks for the review i really appreciate it a lot:). I will work on the poem too thanks for the advice.

Yah it was supposed to end in a tragic note, i do know life is about happiness and hope but for some they do not get the chance too experience ...

Do not worry i figured it out.:)

One more thing how do i edit and change it to 12 .

Okay thank you, sorry i did not know.

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Back again with a review, the poem was really touching and sad. I felt like crying when reading it. The way it is constructed is really good.I was really touched ...

Wow, amazing this a great poem. I love it, I love how you telling the story. Your choice of words just links, since I am cooking now I do a ...

You welcome

No problem:)

Okay i didn't know how to edit but i figured it out so what do you think is it okay or should i fix it again :)

No don't apologise for giving me ideas and helping me to become a better writer. I will write down all my mistakes and work on them. I'm still new in ...

Hi and thank you for the review I will take note of where I went wrong and work on them next time I write. Thank you so much I'm glad ...

Wow this is a great poem, and its my first poem to read, I'm glad I picked it first because it just inspired me to keep on writing. That's why ...

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Wow this is a great poem, and its my first poem to read, I'm glad I picked it first because it just inspired me to keep on writing. That's why ...