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Re: Unravenly
Hey Biscuits! It's GoldenQuill, here with a little review! Hope all is well! To my knowledge, this is a standalone piece. Perhaps it is fanficition, perhaps it is connected to ...
May 11, 2017 -
Re: Seeing Lisa (RC: R1)
Hey, niteowl! It's Quill here! Hope all is well! I'm always nitpicky at first, so let's dive into that, and then go on! look-alike. Shouldn't it be 'look-a-like'? if she ...
Mar 10, 2017 -
Re: Kayla
Hey Ghost! It's Quill, with a quick review here. I'm not the best poem writer, and I don't write it the most often, but I thought I'd share my perspective! ...
Mar 10, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 2.1
Quill here, review, nitpicky, y'know the stuff! Edna could imagine. Sometimes Marguerite didn’t know who Edna was and confused her for her sister, her mother, her grandmother, her best friend ...
Mar 9, 2017 -
Re: Handcuffed
Dang, Cas. It's Quill, here, with a review, and boy oh boy -- I had no idea what I was getting into. This is such a short piece, but it ...
Mar 8, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 1.2
Hi, Blue! It's Quill, here to review, blah blah blah, nitpicky. Also: all my edits this time are hugely stylistic, so totally feel free to ignore them -- but it'd ...
Mar 3, 2017 -
Re: you can be king again - 1.2
Hey Ashnirai! It's Quill, here with a quick review! I haven't read any of your other chapters, so take all of this with a grain of salt! I'm usually very ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Scolopendra chapter 5
Hey Storm, it's Quill, here with a quick review! Obviously, I haven't read any of your other chapters, so take this review with a grain of salt. Also, I tend ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: xx
Hello Skyedreamer! It is Quill, here with a review. I think you paid me a comment on my most recent poem, to which I will thank you. I'm usually nitpicky ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Kinetic Crusade Chapter 8 Sticky Situation
Hey, Hikarufire! It's Quill, here with a review. I haven't read any of your book thus far, so take everything with a grain of salt. I'm mostly looking for grammar ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Ugly Words
Hey Pentavalence! It's Quill, here with a quick review! I read this work earlier, and it's been cycling around in my head since. I actually had a similar-ish thought the ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Play Dead, Longing
Hey sabyemerald! It's Quill, here with a quick review. Usually I'm a bit nitpicky, so I'll dive into that first. wandering in the trail of past trying Do you mean, ...
Feb 25, 2017 -
Re: The Crucifixion and Resurrection
Hey Iamawriter! It's Golden, here with a review. I tend to be nitpicky about grammar, so I'll dive into that first, and then get onto the more finer details. My ...
Feb 25, 2017 -
Re: i am unafraid to die
Hey Castor! It's Quill, here with a quick review. I'm usually a bit nitpicky, so I'll dive into that. I feel like punctuation changed around the second section -- it ...
Feb 24, 2017 -
Re: Widow
Hey, DarkPandemonium! Quill here, for a review! Crimson below actually linked me to this, telling me how much he enjoyed it. Since his review is the only one you have, ...
Feb 23, 2017
