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Flame here! I'm going to cover nitpicks first, and then move onto what I loved, if that's all right. Did anyone escaped? I think you meant "did anyone escape?" I ...

Hey, Lost! The atmosphere's so well-crafted, I can't compliment you enough. Braided with shadow, draped in mist. You start with a significant character's death--risky, but something an experienced wri

Flame here, as promised! Okay, not exactly, but you knew I'd come anyway :P. It’s funny how people are always complaining about time, how they never have enough of it ...

Hey, Inspirus! You took my suggestion--submitting individual chapters. A little lengthy for a YWS submission, but that's understandable, considering the cost's been increased to a thousand points. I a

Flame here! A little late, but here nonetheless. Okay, a lot late. But I'll compensate with...hmm. What will I compensate with? That like was well-deserved, the gushing's well-deserved, and on ...

Back again! Absolutely addicted to your work. Oh, this was also a request? Cool. I'd review it anyway. I love how you devoted an entire chapter to the narrator's journey. ...

Flame here, as promised! Ish :D. Let me just jot down my first impression: The pace was absolutely perfect. Detail fused with detail, like pieces of one puzzle, all clutching ...

Hey, Purple! Heads up, this review's going to be a little jumbled, in terms of praise and nitpicks. I disagree with GreenTulip. Varied sentence structure, subtle humor--not even major factors ...

Back again! I've never seen a YWSer capture abhorrence so well. Distinctively clipped clauses, blunt language, descriptions grilled to perfection. And it all served piping hot, with a sweet glaze ...

Hey, Purple! A little late, but here nonetheless. Once again, fantastic job. You've left me scarce to nitpick. The descriptions...I was blown away. Colorful yet subtly incorporated. And there's someth

Hey there! Apologies in advance for any strangely-phrased phrasings. It's one of those days when your brain's oozing out your ears... I sensed a slight shift in tone from The ...

Flame here, as promised! Heads up, this review's going to be a little jumbled, in terms of praise and nitpicks. A ballad! I love ballads. They're easy to craft, and ...

Hey, Starlinks! Good luck on the contest. I'll admit, plot isn't my cup of tea, but I can certainly tell when a piece's paced well ;). This was absolutely beautiful. ...

Flame here, as promised! I'll confess, I enjoyed this more than the previous. The metaphors were stunning, your word choice gorgeous. This is the exact kind of poetry I treasure. ...

Flame here, as promised! Apologies in advance for any strangely-phrased phrasings. My Wednesday agenda's gotten a bit larger than expected. Your name keeps popping up in the Spotlight, so suffice ...