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Re: The Death of Love
a fair poem, I am sure, your rhyme was grand, your rhythm superb, if but your topic was a bit cliche, what topic isnt nowaday? your imagery was good as ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: Ocelotoscope
well, this is an odd one, for sure, I mean, was this for some kind of contest or somehting, because while totally random poems are nice and all, does it ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: Yet to be titled.
wow, this was an incredibaly emotional poem, about the impermanence of everything, life, love, whatever, of solitude, only met by the silent stares of mailboxes, now thats cool, but a ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: War (Ask Me No Questions)
I enjoyed your poem. after that is said, I think it neccessary to say that the rhythm was good, the rhymes were good, and well, this was a dark poem, ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: M
oooh, a nice style, once i wrote very nice one about turtles, but hey, whatever, anyways, I think the point was more or less random, so I wont bother actually ...
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Crazed
you do like your crazy people, don't you? I mean, WHAT THE? I think, your work is frankly quite good, but seriously, are yo unsane?(similar to unsane, except unsane is ...
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Dead
of course they do, dear, we all live in our own worlds, why? you ask? Because reality is just a word. sounds so simple, but it means so much, anyways, ...
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Mile-marker Zero
I agree, sadly, for the type of poem this is, it would work much better if you cut out a couple stanzas, or combined them down, or somehting, other than ...
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: The Music of Dusk
I thought everyone here knew? Math class is designated poetry writing hour., since we obviously won't actually be doing the math (sorry, bad pun) I loved the poem, the rhythm ...
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Just joined, so thought I should just post something.
I lliked the poem, it had a nicce, somewhat unique rhythm to it, not a big fan of swearing in your work, but hell, it aint my poem. (I know, ...
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: Beyond the Stache
as the proud owner of a mustache, I feel obliged to denounce your poem as blasphemy! muahahahaha! anyways, this was insane, silly, random (duh), and totally awesome, hey, sanity is ...
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: Eclipse
I have to say, this is an odd poem, what exactly is this? epic poem? about a star, I believe, but something else too. now what I really can't tell ...
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: Sister child
she... hmm, is "she," "you?" an interesting poem, that life comes forth new each year, from the ashes of the old, like a clean slate, starting new, fresh, facing the ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Where am I going?
meh, this is the first of your poems that I have read that I can honestly say that I dont like. I mean, its okay, well written, and everything, but ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: The Sytem
I must say that I completely disagree with the previous critiques, and people, if you may have noticed, I only give mainly good reviews, but thats because I won't critique ...
Jan 6, 2009
