Published January 10, 2009
Ocelotoscope
Bastard moon dip
evergreen bathtub
faceplant orange tingle
lickety-boom in a
half-cake boondoggle
shama llama twist brown
leaps a pickle lips
randy lemons bowl crypt
prompt analog of fleshy boat
a raucous he could ski
oh no the child is raining
about the thunderous guise
a bowling grin provokes the shoe
and scan-birds farce can string
shambles are but pocket ropes
who scantily flutbeck once
arduous brilliant soak pour
thins too groat sans cleats
a strumpet crease four crapsicles
high slumtenty armpit thatch
stuttering grease fork
monocle wrathful
napkins marching cove
twixteen thirty
ampersand
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point? naw, just like to do surreal stuff sometimes
if you do understand some of it then yes you should worry
well, this is an odd one, for sure, I mean, was this for some kind of contest or somehting, because while totally random poems are nice and all, does it have a point?
not to be critical, just curious, you see,
is it bad that actually alot of this made sense to me?
well, I think... no, I don't have any idea what to say about your poem, it was... too random to be able to actually correct, or comment on, seriously.
Peace,
God