GlitterGabbi

Thanks :D

Niceee :D

On second thoughts, maybe not xD I like it.

Yush, you helped alot :D (Tho I don't fully understand paragraph 6 7 tho xD)

Thanks :D This really helps. I don't need to put the apostrophe tho xD

Thanks! :D A LOT! :D I'll change it :3

;-; This is epic.

A bit, but I don't think it's the right way to emphasis it.

I looked at your description. :3 "violin near a brook" It's funny because there's this One Piece character called Brook that plays a violin. What a coincidence! xD

Yay thanks! :D :) I thought I needed it to be unique just a but more by making it from an animal's point of view. Hehehehehe.

Rewriting it might take a long time since I'm going for another story currently. >.>

I will admit this is not the best, but I'll rewrite it while I can! But for now, you can read this just for your own entertainment!

"Cool piece my friend" Am i your friend too? :3

;) Yea, I just submitted this for fun, nothing good, just a small sChool project :D it's not the best.... So, I'm gonna make a longer story and a better ...

I can review my own work, right? >:) Well, I did just told everything. Everything was just like, announced. So I have got to add more of the opposite of ...