Glauke

Hey Rain! I'm glad you chose Drive-Thru Review for your story! I don't usually review non-fiction, it isn't really my thing. But, I'll do my best. This is a great ...

One hot, delicious, made-to-order review coming right up! Pain was hidden in the palms of his hands. It seeped out, dripping onto her skin every time she said something wrong. ...

Hello! I like the concept behind this poem, but some of your words were inaccurate. Take a look: You were standing in the shadow, Gazing at the illuminating stars. Your ...

Great job, Kirahh! This is seriously good work (that probably shouldn't be read at 10:03 at night, like I did). Anyway, I did wonder about the "high school" part. You ...

Looks great, BESS! (that stands for BrightEyedSoulSister, by the way) Well, I have someone in my class who matches your description PERFECTLY, (Sebastian, ick. Euggghhh.) so I can really relate. ...

Hello, Sapphire! This is a very interesting poem. It sparks intrigue, and I like that about it. Your poem is in the spoiler :) They're waiting, watching there (add apostrophe) ...

A Perfect Image Am I everything you place me to be? Great first sentence! It attracts the reader's attention very nicely. Am I beautiful, amazing, kind, caring? How can you ...

Hey Whisperer: Looks good; it is apparent of the time and setting, although it is not said point-blank. Watch your commas, there are some places where commas should go, but ...

Hey there Shin! Looks good so far, but I have some little nitpicks: 1st Paragraph: Ah! This paragraph really confuses me! Who are Martin and Alex? Which one is thinking ...

WAHOO! A second, just as good as the first?? AMAZING! You've done it again, my friend! Well, I think that we need not discuss the fantastic aspects of this chapter ...

Hello Beginningtowrite!!! First let me say that this looks great! My best friend is actually working on a piece similar to this (in the love prospect). This is very well-written ...

Hey! Looks great! I could connect with the MC and I could understand her pain. This poem did take an unexpected and slightly emo-ish turn at "Life wasn't worth living"... ...

HEY NITEOWL! Well, this poem looks great! I couldn't find much wrong with it... (yep, you guessed it, here comes the "elaboration") Except: ~I don't really feel like I could ...

LOVE IT SO FAR! Hey Gen! I love your first sentence. It grabbed me and wouldn't let go. (and yes, that is a good thing) The amount of description was ...

Wow! Great! I am completely blown away by this work. The only thing that I would change is to use double apostrophes (quotes) instead of single apostrophes. (Maybe it's your ...