Girl_in_pink

Huh? back again i see "Do you love it?! I soooo Doooo!

I thought it was great at the beggining but i became weird. Though i loved it! keep it up, hope i was helpful

Yah

I gave that nasty fruit To my enemy I left it in a boot And told it to chimney. This was the bit i really liked, although i must say ...

I did love it y'all

I really like what you tried to do here. My poetry isn't as good either but. I think u should make it a little longer and maybe even put a ...

Hey great huh?

I really love this poem, it reminds me of my own past and is a great read..xoxxo [img] [/img]

Although YOU CALLED ME PRETTY IN PINK, I WISH U WOULDN'T COMMENT THE WAY U DID ABOUT ME NOT SAYING MUCH. aS YOU AIN'T EXACTLY GIVING US ANYSHAKES SPEAR. tHIS ...

loved the idea and diary, type storyline

Just brilliant.

Love the idea and chracters.

Wo nderful

Hw hot ! and raw was this! keep it up. (RAw meaning good and nice or sweet) Great work.

Nasser let out an exasperated sigh between his lips and shut his eyes, passing his hand over his bronzed face and toying with his waxed mustache. This part was the ...