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  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Dad?

    Hey, thank you for the review and I'm glad you liked it. And I think your suggestions are quite valid and helpful so I'll try to work on it. The ...

    Jun 10, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: they tell me that writing is a form of art founded on rules

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    Jun 9, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Dad?

    Hey @LittleLee! Thank you so much for the review. And no, I actually liked the criticism because it was quite constructive and I have taken it into stride and made ...

    Jun 9, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Dad?

    Jun 9, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: "Scars to your beautiful"

    Thank you so much for the amazing review! And yes, that's exactly what she's trying to do. And yeah, I've heard the song which is why I put the title ...

    May 24, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: "Scars to your beautiful"

    Thank you so much, I'll try working on that :)

    May 24, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: "Scars to your beautiful"

    Hi, thanks for the lovely review! The word hypertrophic, I understand how it might confuse people but most people with acne have somethings call hypertrophic scars. They are red patches/scars ...

    May 24, 2020
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Silent Water

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    meant to write as a review

    Apr 27, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Dear Universe,

    I'm not offended, and yeah I've been writing a novella(it's in my portfolio) and haven't updated recently but I will soon. :)

    Jan 21, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Dear Universe,

    Hey, Chris. Well, it's not really an opinion as such. I've been going through a very hard time and life just keeps throwing these curve balls at me and I ...

    Jan 21, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: When The Body Has Turned Against you

    Jan 20, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: When The Body Has Turned Against you

    Thank you so much! I was really nervous because I was writing after such a long time and I'm glad you liked it. And yes, I've already tagged it but ...

    Jan 18, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Love Conquers

    Thank you so much!!! And I'll try to work on the format.

    Apr 30, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural Re: Frost Burnt

    Thank you so much! No I didn't use a typewriter for this, but I always wish to use one. Thank you for the suggestions, I'll keep them in mind when ...

    Apr 30, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Love Conquers

    Thank you so much for the review! I understand your concern and will try to make it better.

    Apr 29, 2019


I'm also not sure why but even though I normally wear cool tones I have a feeling red would have been my color in the 1860s.
— Elinor