GingerLizzy

Oh and I haven't heard that before? Nevermind; it seems that quite a few people were discomforted by this poem and I'm not saying it;s my best work - although ...

I actually really dislike this and I think I'm gonna just delete it and start over. I guess I was trying too hard; even I admit that. Gosh.

Gosh I just... What... I don't... Oh my. This.. Is... Great.

I must say, I don't really think this is a poem. It was good and the descrption was nice, but it just isn;t a poem I don't think. Perhaps ask ...

Okay, thanks Twitty ^^ I totally just edited.

'Kay I'm thinking about doing a song which is compiled up of lyrics from other songs. Of course, I'll outline all of these songs and artists before posting, but I ...

Gosh, change the structure a little and you're onto something cracking here! I loved this and the imagery was fantastic, full of emotion that really sank in. You've definately got ...

My immediate though after this poem was; OH NO! QUICK GET THE PAPER! Hehe I loved this, the imagery was really good and the flow was continuous, which made it ...

I loved the first one; the imagery was deliciously dramatic and the flow worked well with both the small amount and the imagery. Good work. I'm not sure about the ...

Ugh... I know how you feel and I'm sorry you had to go through this. It was written weel, but please - I exagerate this - don't block it all ...

Not bad, it ws readable. I liked some of your imagery and the structure was okay, but maybe you should concentrate on the rhythm so that when it is read, ...

Hehe I am an impatient little goose ^^ This is lovely by the way.

Cliche. I liked this, but I've read it all before - low on the originality scale. It would be nice to see you change this into something of your own.

Not bad, quite good, not great. Liked the concept but I guess I couldn't get to grips with the flow.

Wow, this was really good and funny. The only complaint is that sometimes the structure was like wading in super glue. Other than that, super work here.