GingerLizzy

I liked this. It's a different approach to the romance poetry of today and it outlines a lot of different possible relationships the girl would like with the boy. I ...

This was good and very sweet, I might add. But I had a slight problem with your rhyming and flow in some of the verses. The rhythm was a little ...

Wow I liked this, as it was strange and gives off two impressions of what it is really about. For example, when I was reading it, I first thought that ...

This is like.. Gravy without the chicken stock. Bland and nothing too special, but still altogether nice. I'm ont a large fan of the depressing stuff, poetry or otherwise, but ...

Oh my gosh... isn't your boyfriend the romantic ^^ I liked this, it is very sweet and made me stop and think about my own relationships and how I sometimes ...

This is a confusing piece.. But for your first attempt, well done. I am in the beginner stages still and I can't give much advice or help [How useful am ...

I have to say, this poem made me frown and I dont fully understand the structure and composure to be truly honest. Your rhyming is good, but some of your ...

Okay... I liked this because it has good imagary but I don't think that it flows all too well. In my opinion, this is because of the second verse and ...

I liked this actually, and I was surprised that I did. It was funny and reminded me of Dr. Zues... whether or not you find that an insult or a ...

I loved this as you made the man out to be a mysterious and handsome person. You're imagary and structure was good, I think, and I particularly liked the last ...

Well.. Ignoring the comments from the other "bitchy crtiquer..." I liked this piece. I found it clever that the last lines of the last three verses made up the first ...

I liked this. It flows well I think and the imagary it great. I like the rhyming and also, according to the title it is accoustic. I felt that. I ...

Wings of angels are Rived by ravens Out of pure sport. I liked this poem but there is one thing I didn't understand. The last line of the first first, ...

Hmm.. I can't say I loved this, but I have taken a liking to it. The poem flows along as it tells the story, which is sad to say, a ...

I have to say, I have become a fan of this pome. I like how it rhymes, but - unlike most rhyming poerty - it has quite a dark meaning, ...