GingerLizzy

I liked this, the rhythm was pretty good and I liked the meaning behind it. In some lines though, you tend to cram them full of syllables that are not ...

Loved this. Your imagery was really good and the flow and emotions that ran from it sank in so I could reaaly feel them. Your repetition of the waterfall line ...

I liked the imagery in this and thought that you described the snow and it;s actions in a way that we can all picture easily in our minds - even ...

This is actually fantastic, the idea of the ghosts being memories - right? I liked this because I'm into the whole supernatural thing and have heard that some house don;t ...

I think the concept and meaning behind this poem was good, but I am sorry to say the way you wrote it just didn't put your point across well enough. ...

Hmm.. Not bad actually You use good imagary and such, and it tends to have a good flow, although sometimes this is out of whack and tends to just... stumble ...

I liked this. The referral to the fence keeping the gardens apart made me think of worlds that are far apart, like the rich and the poor maybe? The structure ...

This was a deicious new change to what I would normally read and to say that it is your first post on here, it wasn't too bad. I'd consider a ...

[Tries to reach for that one last glimmer of happiness, then it's gone, swallowed by the giant they call... EMO] Now, this is personal preference but I didn't like that ...

Loved the concept to be honest, but again; your structure seems all wrong? Where are the other pieces of punctuation, the variation from the comma and period? Without these, it ...

If this was a cake, I'd say yummy. It worked well and I thought that all of these little poems were a wonderful idea, instead of squishing the whole solar ...

I have nothing much to say really. [echoes most of the things that have been outlined by Myth] I enjoyed reading this and thought that the idea was strange, but ...

Not bad, I liked the depth of it and for once, I understood a poem that had depth to it. That's a change. I liked the structure and your punctuation ...

Awwh, pretty sad but nice too. It's really sweet and you use good imagary to portray the boy's feelings. Some parts flowed wonderfully, although in other, I just couldn't feel ...

You know... I'm not so sure about this. I didn't dislike it, I actually enjoyed reading it, but I don't think I liked it immensly either. I'm pretty much neutral. ...